2022写英文求职信的细节写英文求职信的细微环节写英文求职信的细微环节求职信的实际目的在于获得面谈的机会。很多人都复制网上的求职信范本，导致一模一样，这是特别不行取的。我们已经讲过怎样写求职信，这次我们来谈谈求职信写作中简单被忽视的细微环节问题。一、求职信的第一段说明写信的目的'，有些专家认为不宜用分词句子，比如用下面的句子做开头，因为这样的句子被人用得大多，第1页共9页显得陈腐，失去特点。Replyingtoyouradvertisement...Answeringyouradvertisement...Believingthatthereisanopportunity...Thinkingthatthereisavacancyinyourcompany...Havingreadyourad...再比较下面三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。A:(1)ReplyingtoyourrecentadvertisementintheBostonEveningGlobe,Iwishtoapplyforthepositionofsalesmanager.(2)Iamapplyingforthepositionofsalesmanager.I第2页共9页believemyqualificationswillmeetyourexactingrequirements.B:(1)Ibelieveafterreadingyouradvertisementinthismorning'sJournalthatyouareofferingjusttheopportunityIamlookingfor.(2)Youradvertisementinthismorning'sJournalforanadjustmentmanagerpromptedmetoapplyforthisposition.C:(1)HavingreadyouradvertisementintheNewYorkTimesforanaccountant,Ithoughtyoumightbe第3页共9页interestedinmyapplication.(2)Inyouradvertisementforanaccountant,youindicatedthatyourequiretheservicesofacompetentperson,withthoroughtraininginthefieldofcostaccounting.Pleaseconsidermeanapplicantfortheposition.HerearemyreasonsforbelievingIamqualifiedforthiswork.二、在提到希望得到的待遇时，可用类似的句子：I'dprefernottosetasalary,butsinceyouask,Iconsider第4页共9页6,500amonthtobesatisfactory.It'shardformetosaywhatmysalaryshouldbesetat,butifpressedIwouldhavetoaskforamonthasaninitialsalary.Idon'tfeelthatIshouldsetmyownsalary,asIamhappyenoughtohavetheprivilegeofworkingforyou.However,Iwouldconsideramonthsatisfactorycompensationformyapprenticeship.本文由WWw.YjSjL.oRG高校生个人简历网供应第5页共9页三、提起或要求待遇时不要过分虚心或表示歉意，下列句子不宜运用：Asforsalary,Idonotknowwhattosay.Would$4,500amonthbetoomuch?DoyouthinkIwouldbeaskingtoomuchifIsaid5,000dollarsamonth?YouknowwhatmyservicesareworthbetterthanIdo.AllIwantisalivingwage.四、关于求职信的结尾用语，下面也有三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。第6页共9页A:(1)懦弱、羞怯的：IfyouthinkIcanfillthepositionafteryouhavereadmyletter,Ishallbegladtotalkwithyou.(2)改写后（较佳）：Ifmyqualificationsmeetyourstandards,Iwouldbehappytospeakwithyouinperson.B:(1)怀疑，不妥、担心全的：Ifyouareinterested,pleaseletmeknowimmediately,asI'msureaninterviewwillconvinceyouI'mthemanforthejob.(2)改写后：Iwouldliketorequestaninterview.Youcan第7页共9页reachmebytelephoneatBeijing123456betweenthehoursof7-9a.m.and5:30-9:30p.m.anyevening.C:(1)请求式的句子，不够完整（漏掉面谈时间）：Iwouldappreciatetheopportunityforaninterview.IcanbereachedbycallingBeijing12345678.(2)改写后：MayIhavetheopportunitytodiscussthismatterfurtherwithyou?MytelephonenumberisBeijing12345678.Youcanreachmebetweennineandfiveo'clockduringtheday.第8页共9页本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第9页共9页
