HowtoRewriteSentenceswithAttributiveClausesBySophiaFuHainanOverseasChineseMiddleSchoolWhatisattributiveclause?Lilylikesreadingwholovessportstoo.Iwasborninwinterwhentheworldisallwhite.•Task1:FilmReview•Task2:Editingastory•Task3:DescribingpicturesTestTask1-FilmReviewTask1-FilmReviewIceAge4ContinentalDriftcontinuesitsfunnystylewhichmakesuslaughallthewayandlearn.Thejourneystartedbyanaccidentthatwasmadebyasquirrel.Diego,whowastheleader,openedanewglacieradventurewheretheymeetpirate.WithoutManny'sstrongwill,thisteamcouldn'tworktoo.IceAge,itselfwasadangerousperiodwhenglacierssometimescracked.Fightingwithcrudepiratesmadetheadventuremorethrilling,whichmaybethebest-sell.ReasonswhyIceAgeseriesareblockbustersarealotincludingbeautifulpictures,surprisingplotsandfunnycharacters.Atinymotioncauseshugechangesofearthwheresevencontinentsandfouroceanswereproduced.Lotsofanimalswereforcedtoleavehome,whichwasthebeginningofthisadventure.PointOuttheModifiedNoun,andRelativePronounorAdverbIceAge4ContinentalDriftcontinuesitsfunnystylewhichmakesuslaughallthewayandlearn.Thejourneystartedbyanaccidentthatwasmadebyasquirrel.Atinymotioncauseshugechangesofearthwheresevencontinentsandfouroceanswereproduced.Lotsofanimalswereforcedtoleavehome,whichwasthebeginningofthisadventure.Diego,whowastheleader,openedanewglacieradventurewheretheymeetpirate.WithoutManny'sstrongwill,thisteamcouldn'tworktoo.IceAge,itselfwasadangerousperiodwhenglacierssometimescracked.Fightingwithcrudepiratesmadetheadventuremorethrilling,whichmaybethebest-sell.ReasonswhyIceAgeseriesareblockbustersarealotincludingbeautifulpictures,surprisingplotsandfunnycharacters.Task1-FilmReviewObserveandSummarizetheBasicRulesofAttributiveClauseTask2-EditingastoryOnceuponatime,therewasaprettyprincess.Shewasbornonacoldwinterday.Shewasaswhiteassnow.Hernamewas---SevenDwarfsandSnowWhiteSevenDwarfsandSnowWhiteOnceuponatime,therewasaprettyprincess.Shewasbornonacoldwinterday.Shewasaswhiteassnow.HernamewasSnowWhite.SnowWhitewaskindandbeautiful.Shehadbigsmilingeyesandasweetvoice.Everyonelovedheraswellashermom.Unfortunatelyshediedyoung.AnewQueencame.Shewaswell-lookingbutunkindtoeveryoneespeciallySnowWhite.TheQueenhadamirror.Itcouldtellwhotheprettiestwomanintheworldwas.Oneday,whentheQueenasked,themirroranswered,SnowWhitewastheprettiestwomanintheworld.TheanswersettheQueenonfire.ThemeanwomanorderedahuntertokillSnowWhite.Luckilythehunterwasakind-heartedman.HesetSnowWhitefree.Thegirlranawayintoaforestandfoundahouse.Sevendwarfslivedinthehouse.TheylikedSnowWhiteandinvitedhertolivewiththem.Afterhearingnewsfromthemirror,theQueenwentalonewithapoisonousapple.Theapplewasredandlookedsodelicious.SnowWhitealmostatetheappleatthatmoment.ThenthedwarfscamebackandsavedSnowWhiteagain.SevenDwarfsandSnowwhiteOnceuponatime,therewasaprettyprincess.Shewasbornonacoldwinterday.Shewasaswhiteassnow.HernamewasSnowWhite.SnowWhitewaskindandbeautiful.Shehasbigsmilingeyesandasweetvoice.Everyonelovesheraswellashermom.Unfortunatelyshediedyoung.AnewQueencame.Shewaswell-lookingbutunkindtoeveryoneespeciallySnowWhite.TheQueenhadamirror.Itcouldtellwhotheprettiestwomanintheworldwas.Oneday,whentheQueenasked,themirroranswered,SnowWhitewastheprettiestwomanintheworld.TheanswersettheQueenonfire.SevenDwarfsandSnowWhiteThemeanwomanorderedahuntertokillSnowWhite.Luckilythehunterwasakind-heartedman.HesetSnowWhitefree.Thegirlranawayintoaforestandfoundahouse.Sevendwarfslivedinthehouse.TheylikedSnowWhiteandinvitedhertolivewiththem.Afterhearingnewsfromthemirror,theQueenwentalonewithanpoisonousapple.Theapplewasredandlookedsodelicious.SnowWhitealmostatetheappleatthatmoment.ThenthedwarfscamebackandsavedSnowWhiteagain.Onceuponatime,therewasaprettyprincess.Shewasbornonacoldwinterday.Shewasaswhiteassnow.HernamewasSnowWhite.Task3-DescribingPicturesTask3-DescribingPicturesDescribePictureswithAttributiveClausesSection3-DescribingPicturesThezebraisanaturalcomedianwhoalwaysmakesfun.Thereasonwhyhedresseslikethisisheisshowinghistricks.Thezebraisatthebackofthestagewherelotsoftoolsandpropsare.RewardingWhatwehavelearned?Nevergiveup!WeloveEnglish!TobeagoodEnglisheditorisnoteasy!AttributiveClauseEnglishissouseful!HomeworkMakeasummaryofMadagascar3withatleast3to5sentencesusingattributiveclauses.Thankyou!
