2011年大作文:“旅途之余”——旅游与环保Directions:Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing
Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen3)giveyourcomments
经典范文赏析(19分作文)Asisvividlydepictedinthedrawingabove,(常用套话,引出画面内容)sittingontheboatandenjoyingtheirsightseeing,acoupleofyoungstersarethrowingrubbishintothesea
Whatisconveyedinthepictureisbothrealisticandthought-provoking
(常用套话,引出象征意义)(描述画面+浅浅点名寓意)Theimpliedmeaningofthegivenpicturecanbeelaboratedintermsof(常用套话,引出寓意)environmentalprotectionandpublicmanners
Ontheonehand,alongwiththedevelopmentoftheeconomyandsociety(常用套话),peopletendtoattachgreatimportancetopersonalandeconomicinterests,ignoringecologicalbalance
Asaconsequence,environmenthasbeenpollutedsoseriouslythatenvironmentalprotectionshouldbeputontheagendai