A Handout for the Writing LessonBook6 Unit 1 Persuasive letter: Letter of suggestion1. The sample(范文):April 27, 2015Dear headmaster,I'm Li Hua. I’m writing to advice you to make some changes about our school library.First of all, it would be better if the library is equipped with（配备） better air conditioner(空调), because it is beneficial for us to concentrate on our study. Furthermore （ 此 外 ） , as is known to us, drinking much water is important to our health, so my suggestion is that there should be a water dispenser(饮水机) in every reading room. Last but not least(最后), I would like to suggest that the library should be open to the students on weekends.I do hope you can take my suggestions into consideration and make reforms（ 改 革 ） in the library, so the library may take on a new look as soon as possible.Looking forward to your reply.Sincerely, Li Hua2. Useful Expressions(有用的表达)To express the purpose of writing:1). I am writing to you for the purpose of......2). I am writing to you to express my views concerning(关于)...3). To give suggestions:1).…had better do sth.2). I would like to do sth.3).…Transitional words(衔接词)：firstly, secondly, thirdly…finally; on the one hand, on the other hand; …Self-Checklist ：I have five parts: Date\Beginning\Body\Ending\Signature 口My letter contains three paragraphs.口My first paragraph contains(包含): The self-introdution 口 The purpose of writing口 My second paragraph contains: The suggestions 口 The reasons 口My third paragraph expresses my wish/hope. 口I have checked the tense and the voice(时态和语态). 口I have used a range of transitional words(衔接词). 口I have checked my spelling. 口I have checked my punctuation（标点符号). 口
