Module 3 My First Ride on a TrainSection Ⅳ Writing写作指导Ⅰ.佳作展示与背诵假如你是王林，今年暑假乘火车与父母去拉萨（Lhasa）旅游。请根据下列内容要点用英语写一篇短文：1．舒适、宽敞的旅游列车；2．享受到良好的服务；3．沿途风光迷人；4．你的感受。注意：1．词数：100 左右；2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3．参考词汇：氧气系统 oxygen system；草原 grassland；服务员 attendantOne possible versionI will never forget my first trip to Lhasa.I went there with my parents during this summer vacation.The cruise train is wide ， bright and modern ， which makes us quite comfortable.The two oxygen systems make sure that passengers breathe completely easily.The attendants on the train provided us with the best service.Smiling faces and polite words were aro und us all the time.What's more ， I appreciated the beautiful scenery all the way.The snowcovered mountains ， the endless grassland and some villages in the mountains made me excited.It was really an unforgettable journey.I was amazed that our country had changed so much.Ⅱ.思路点拨1．这是一篇旅游记事。旅游记事是叙述在旅途中的所见、所闻及所感的，所以时态以一般过去时为主，人称为第一人称。有时也可写成旅游日记，格式与日记格式相同。2．正文可分为三段：第一段：开门见山，点明主题——难忘的拉萨之行。第二段：详细描述旅程中的所见、所闻和所感。第三段：前后呼应，深化主题——这确实是一次难忘的旅行。3．常用语汇（1）有关旅游的：travel，journey，tourist，sightseeing，scenery，view，guide ，package ...（2）有关景点的：beautiful，wonderful，colorful，attractive，places of interest，the beauty of nature ...（3）有关心情的：happy，glad，amazed，unforgettable，impressive，excited，have a good time ...4．句型I will never forget my first trip to ...This is the first time that I have visited ...It's one of the most ...places that I have been to ...We are all attracted by the beauty of nature ...I experienced ...I appreciated ...It is really an unforgettable travel ...Ⅲ.经典句式1 ． The cruise train is wide ， bright and modern ， which makes us quite comfortable.首先，which 引导的非限制性定语从句修饰前面的句子，是复杂句式；再次 make sb./sth.＋adj.也是写作中的常见句式。2．What's more，I appreciated the beautiful scenery all the way.此句中 what's more 和 all the way 的使用给句子添加了色彩。1 提示：用最精炼的语言把你当堂掌握的核心知识的精华部分和基本技能的要领部分写下来并进行识记。2
