第五讲书信体作文——普通书信&电子邮件A典型例题(2018·全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：1.学校的体育场馆；2.主要的运动项目；3.你喜欢的项目。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇学生习作DearPeter，I'm①verygladtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolinyourlastletter.Thefollowingarerelevantdetails.②Anewstadiumhasbeenbuilt.③Ithasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.④Asthestadiumwassetup，⑤manysportsareabletobeheld.⑥Itmakespingpong，footballaswellasrunningcompetitionenjoygreatpopularity.Myfavouritesportisplayingbasketball.⑦Itisbecauseithasbeengivingmestrengthtofacethechallengesinmylife.⑧Ihopeyouwillcometoourschoolandexperienceitinthenearfuture.Yours，LiHua升级方案1.升级词汇①：more_thandelighted2.在句②前加过渡词“首先”：To_start/beginwith3.句②③合并升级为定语从句：To_start_with，a_new_stadium_has_been_built，which_has_become_the_new_landmark_in_our_school.4.升级词汇⑤：a_wide_rangeof5.句④⑤⑥升级为with结构，v.ing作状语：With_the_stadium_set_up，a_wide_range_of_sports_are_able_to_be_held，making_pingpong，football_as_well_as_running_competition_enjoy_great_popularity.6.句⑦升级句式：The_reason_is_that_it_has_been_giving_me_strength_to_face_the_challenges_in_my_life.7.在句⑧前增添过渡语：All_in_all/In_conclusion满分作文DearPeter，I'mmorethandelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolinyourlastletter.Thefollowingarerelevantdetails.Tobeginwith，anewstadiumhasbeenbuilt，whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Withthestadiumsetup，awiderangeofsportsareabletobeheld，makingpingpong，footballaswellasrunningcompetitionenjoygreatpopularity.Myfavouritesportisplayingbasketball.Thereasonisthatithasbeengivingmestrengthtofacethechallengesinmylife.Allinall，Idohopeyouwillcometoourschoolandexperienceitinthenearfuture.Yours，LiHuaB典型例题(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：(1)时间和地点；(2)内容：学习唐诗；(3)课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。审题谋篇学生习作DearLeslie，①IamwritingtotellyoumyplanforthecomingChineselesson.②I'vedecidedtoteachyouTangpoetryinRoom101Building1onWednesday，whichwilllasttwohours.③TangpoetryisasymbolofChinesetraditionalliterature，andplaysanimportantpartinChineseculture，soit'snecessaryforyoutomasterit.④Besides，inordertolearnTangpoetrywell，you'dbettergetsomeinformationaboutTangDynastybeforeclass.⑤Pleasetellmeifit'sconvenientforyou.⑥Furthermore，whenyoumeetwithsomepuzzlingquestions，don'thesitatetoturntome.Yours，LiHua升级方案1.在句②中使用短语替换动词decided：made_up_my_mind2.在句②中加入具体的时间早上8点：at_8_a．m.3.在句③中使用非谓语短语替换andplaysanimportantpartinChineseculture：playing_an_important_part_in_Chinese_culture4.在句③中使用抽象名词具体化替换necessary：a_necessity5.在句③中使用短语替换master：have_a_good_knowledge_of6.句⑤改为问句，体现交际性：Would_you_tell_me_if_it's_convenient_for_you？满分作文DearLeslie，IamwritingtotellyoumyplanforthecomingChineselesson.I'vemadeupmymindtoteachyouTangpoetryinRoom101Building1at8a．m.onWednesday，whichwilllasttwohours.TangpoetryisasymbolofChinesetraditionalliterature，playinganimportantpartinChineseculture，soit'sanecessityforyoutohaveagoodknowledgeofit.Besi...
