大学英语四级写作评分实例题目1：PositiveandNegativeAspectsofSports1、参加体育运动有许多好处2、但也有副作用3、你的体会【样卷1】得分：2分Ilikesports.Ittakememoreprofit.Thefirstoneishealthaswellknown.Thesecondisrelaxion.Afterlearninginschool,Ilikemakesomemovement,justasrunning.Itcanrelaxmyself.Althoughtherehassomanyotherpositiveaspectsofsports.Therealsohassomanynegativeaspectsofsports.Itmakesomeonedamagours.Becauseyouwouldhurtinsport,justlikefootball.It’smostlikelytohappenbutitcouldn’tproventpeoplefromsports.Ithinkthatsportstakemoreprofitthandamaguostome.Ilikesports.【样卷2】得分：5分Sportscanprovideusgoodhealthy.Especiallywhenweareinchildhood.Sportscanbebenefitofourgrowing.Itcanstrengthenourbody,brightenourbrain,widenourallkindsofinterestsandmakeyouencouragable.Asastudentstudyingincollegesportsisessentialandimportantforourstudy.Positivesportscanmakeyousucceedinallkindsofthings.Butitdoesn’tfollowthatsportshasnotanyshortcoming.Ifoccupyingallofyousparetime,sportwillinfluentotherhobbiesofyours.Ifyoudothatforalongtime,youwillbecomeahollow-brainman.Itisterribleforyourfuture.Ilikesportsverymuch.Becausesuitablesportsreallycanhelpmystudy.Anditmakemeconfident.Icansoluteanyquestiondependingonmyenergyandstoringbody.【样卷3】得分：8分Therearealotofpositiveaspectsofsports.Peopletakespartinsportsandgamesfromtimetotimeislikelytohaveagoodbody.Whilehavingsports,peoplecanstrengthenhismuscles,fastenhisspeedofresponse,andincreasehisabilityofresistingdisease.Sportsarealsohelpfultotrainpeople’scharactorsanddetermianation.Butyoucanneverneglectthenegativeaspectsofsports.Peoplemayhurthimselforotherswhenhejoinsports,especiallythoseareviolent.Ontheend,havingsportshasmoreadvantagesthandisvantages.Ienjoyplayingbasketballandthishasbroughtmesuchexcitement.AndIhavemakesomegoodfriendswhenweplayedbasketballtogether.WealwayssticktotherulessothatIneverhurtothersorbehurted.【样卷4】得分：11分Sportshavealotofgoodeffects.Itcanmakeyoustrongerandmoreintelligent.Propersportscanalsomakeyoufeelenergeticforwork.Forexample,ifyouplayfootball,yourmusclesexerciseandbecamestrongerandstronger.Ifyouplaychess,yourbrainmovesquickly.That’sgoodforthedevelopmentofyourintelligence.Ontheotherhand,sportshaveafewilleffects.Itmaymakeyoufeeltiredifyouexercisetoomuch.Andoldpeoplemaybehurtbyimpropersports.Furthermoresportsmayevenleadtosuddendeath.Iprefertoplayfootball.I’mamemberofcollegeteam.WhenIplay,Ifeelexcited,andafterit,Ifeelrelaxed.That’stosay:it’sgoodformyhealth.【样卷5】得分：14分Sportsbenefitusinmanyrespects.Whentakingpartinsports,wegetthechancetotrainalmostallpartsofourbodies.Thereisnodoubtthatpropersportsactivitieskeepourphysicalfitness.Furthermore,sportscanenrichourlifeandmaintainourpsychologicalhealth.Throughparticipation,everyonecanlearnthatontheplaygroundhenotonlystrugglesforhimselfbutalsofightsforhisteam.Sportsteachusaboutconsideration,cooperationandoptimismtofailure.Butsportscandosomeharmtothosepeoplewhocannotplantheiractivitiesproperly.Toohardtrainingmyhurttheirbodies,exhausttheirvigor,andevencausethemtobesick.Ingeneral,Ilovesports.Ienjoysports.IfeelthatInotonlygainawell-balancedlifethroughgoinginforsports,butalsogetmorechancestomoveclosertonature.SportsaddhappinesstomyeverydaylifewhenIperforminadecentway.解释说明型模板首段（描述现象）模板1①Nowadays,withthereformof（现象的背景）,（描述现象）.②Thisphenomenonhas...
