授课教师李丽娟教学内容初三英语书面表达专题复习教学目标1.指导学生掌握书面表达语篇结构的组织技巧2.培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思以及罗列提纲的能力3.指导学生小组合作评改学生习作教学重点1.英语写作的基本要求和注意事项2.培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思以及罗列提纲的能力教学难点培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思以及罗列提纲以及拓展成文的能力讨论法教与学互动设计Step1Warm-upandlead-in.AttracttheSsattention.Letthemfocusonthetopic.LeadouttheimportanceofEnglishwriting.Step2Presentation1.TellStypesofEnglishwriting,relevantelementsandhowtowriteagoodargumentation.2.TogetherreadthecompositionofgraduationtestofEnglishofShaoyangin2015.3.ShowSssomepicturesandlistsomerelevantpoints.Sshaveasimpledebate,listsomeusagesandnegativeeffectsofusingmobilephones.4.AskSstowriteacomposition.①HaveSswriteacompositioninlimitedtime.②AskSstovaluatetheirwritingsinpairs.③ListthecommonmistakesandtellSshowtocorrect.Step3Homework1.Summaryhowtowriteagoodcomposition.2.Rewritethecompositionandtrytoreciteit.PS:书面表达两篇一.真题回顾我们从各大媒体了解到由于空气污染导致人类受害的种种现象。比如：中国的许多城市都出现“雾霾”；印度有成千人死于高温；世界各地出现各种肺病等等。对此情况请你根据以下要点，以Protecttheair为题，写一篇英语短文，呼吁大家减少空气污染。1.Theairhasbecomereallypollutedaroundus.2.Thereisheavysmog.3.ThousandsofpeopleinIndia...4.Wecanbeginwithsmallthings...参考词汇：die(死）；hightemperature(高温);lungdisease(肺病);plant(种植);ridebikes(骑自行车);calltoprevent(呼吁阻止)高分范文Protecttheair.Airisasimportantasfood.Theairhasbecomereallypollutedaroundus.ThereisheavysmoginmanycitiesinChina.ThousandsofpeopleinIndiadiedofhightemperature.Allkindsoflungdiseasesappearedaroundtheworld.Allthesethingsdogreatharmtopeople.Thereasonisthattheairisbadlypolluted.sowemustdosomethingtoprotecttheair.Forexample,wecanplantmanytrees.Wecanridebikestoworkortoschool.It'sourdutytocalltopreventairpollution.It'simportanttoprotecttheair.Ifeveryonedoessomethingtoprotecttheair,ourlifewillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Let'stakeactionnow.二．即时练习对我们所有人，智能手机已经在我们的日常生活中发挥着越来越重要的作用。我们可以用手机读书看报、发送信息、打电话；除此之外，还可以用手机欣赏音乐、网上购物和玩游戏。但是因为玩手机，越来越多的人变得沉默。我们大部分的时间都在低头玩手机，成为了低头一族。许多负面影响随之而来，交通意外事故的发生、亲人朋友之间的沟通变少、视力下降、肩颈疾病……所以，有些家长绝对地禁止了孩子玩手机，让孩子们心生不满。对此情况，请你根据以下要点，以Howtousemobilephonesproperly?为题，写一篇英语短文，呼吁大家要合理使用手机。1.Mobilephonesareverypopular.2.Theyareplayinganimportantpartinourlife.3.Theyalsobringusproblems.4.Weshouldusethemproperly.参考词汇：phubber(低头族);makephonecalls(打电话);sendmessages(发短信);affect(影响);properly(正确地);problem(问题);trafficaccident(交通事故);要求：1.80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入次数；2.语法正确，文理通顺流畅，并适当发挥；3.书写规范，卷面整洁；4.文中不得使用你的真实姓名及校名。参考范文Howtousemobilephonesproperly?Nowadays,mobilephonesareverypopular.Theyareplayinganimportantpartinourlife.Wecanusethemtoreadnews,sendmessages,makephonecallsandreadallkindsofbooks.Besides,wecanusethemtoenjoymusic,dosomeshoppingandplaygames.Inaword,mobilephoneshavemadeourlifemorecolorful.However,theyalsobringusproblems.Forexample,ifpeopleusethemwhileriddingordriving,theymayhavetrafficproblems.Ifwespendalotoftimeonthemobilephones,itmayaffectourstudyorwork.What’smore,theyarebadforournecksandeyes.Inmyopinion,wecanusemobilephonestorelaxourselvesan.Butweshouldn’tusethemwhilingstudyingorworking,andwecantspendlotsoftimeonthem.
