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CONTINUATIONWRITINGPOWERPOINT读后续写之语言描写Goose,goose,goose,songtoheaven.Whitehairfloatinggreenwater,redpalmpokingclearwaves.景物，动作描写Lookingup,Ifindthemoonbright;Bowing,inhomesicknessI'mdrowned动作，环境，心理描写Beneaththerosycloudsandscentedmistsstoodtheyoungman,alldressedinblack,hiseyebrowsasdarkasifpaintedwithink,thehairabovehistemplesassharplyoutlinedasifcutwithaknife.那烟霞底下立着的玄衣青年，眉如泼墨，鬓若刀裁。——《三生三世十里桃花》景物，外貌描写比喻的修辞手法Ourlegsweresoheavyandcoldthattheyfeltlikeblockofice.Atoneponitweweresohighthatwefoundourselvescyclingthroughclouds.Brickscoveredthegroundlikeredautumnleaves.Slowlythecitybegantobreatheagain.Thecountry,coveredwithcherryflowers,looksasthoughitiscoveredwithpinksnow.AsVictorHugooncesaid,“Laughteristhesunthatdriveswinterfromthehumanface.”充分利用教材的修辞素材The_________cherryflowers,coveredwith_________snow,lookasiftheywere________maidsrosy/pinkwhiteblushing/charming描写作为记叙文的一种辅助的表达方式对加强文章的表现力发挥着重要的作用，它要求我们善于捕捉细节、刻画细节，有时还可以用上比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。一篇好的作文往往因为一两处细节描写而出彩。描写分为：情感心理描写，动作描写，环境描写，神态外貌描写等记叙文中描写的作用Tip1:Languagedatabasefordescribingfeelingssmile•Heissmiling•Heworea_______smileonhisface•Thesmileonhisfaceshonelikea_________.•Hiseyes__________withpleasure.•Unforgettablewerehiseyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.shiningdiamondtwinkledcry•Sheiscrying•Tearsare_______downfromhereyes•Shesatsilently,tearsrollingdownher______.•shefeltlikeshewasfloatinginanoceanof__________.•She________bitterly,______thesaltfromthetearsthat________downherface.rollingcheekssadnesstastingsobbedstreamedscared•Heisscared•Hewas________byfear.•Fear________overhim.•A________offearwelledupinhim.•Hisfaceturned_______andstoodtheretongue-tied.•Hisheart________soviolentlythathefeltnearlysuffocated(窒息).beatchokedfloodedfloodpale•Sheisexcited.•Sheopenshermouth________and________hereyesonthebicycle.Hereyesareshininglike_________widelyfixeddiamonds•Sheisnervous.•________thebartightly,shedarenotmovehereyesawayfromthebicycle.Herbodyisrigid(僵硬的)._____________tension(紧张、不安),sheraisedhershoulderunnaturally.HoldingFilledwith非谓语：简洁而不简单动词、形容词、副词：词性丰富、画面感、生动Tip1:LanguagedatabasefordescribingfeelingspositivefeelingsHiseyesdancedwithjoyandsweetness.hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.AbroadsmilespreadoverLucy'sface.Hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.Tearsofexcitement/joywelledupinhiseyes.Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating.（恐惧）Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.（害怕）Astheresultofanaccident,Tonywassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.(绝望）withtearsstreamingdownhisface/cheeksShesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.（悲伤）Shewaschokedbyfear./Fearslowlycreepsuponher.（害怕）Tip1:LanguagedatabasefordiscribingfeelingsnegativefeelingsTheLostWorld《失落的世界》有关情绪描写的句子：Myheartplungeddowntomyboots.Hisbeardwasbristling.Helookedreadytoexplodewithrage.Iwastremblingwithexcitement.Thenhegavemeagreatburstoflaughter.Hiseyeslitteredwithexcitement.Whenhetalkedofit,hisquietmannerchanged,hiscoldblueeyessparkledwithenthusiasm.Tip1:Languagedatabasefordiscribingfe...