如何描写人物第一段:①人物简介;②人物事迹;第二段:人物成就,说明此人值得尊敬/爱戴/学习的地方
第三段:人们对该人物的印象或评价
写作时应注意以下几点:1
确定文体:以人物描写为主,可辅以叙述和评论
主体时态:文章以一般过去时或一般现在时为主
主体人称:第三人称
内容要点:①人物简介;②人物事迹;③人物成就;④人物评价及其他
思路引导Planyourwritingasfollows
Makeaplan
Writedownalltheideasyouwanttouseinyourdescription
Eachideawillhelptomakeaparagraph
Thenseparatethemsothatyoucanlisttheinterestingwordsthatwillhelpyouwritethedescription
Nowwritethefirstparagraph
Thefirstsentenceshouldgiveanintroductionofthiswomantothereaders
Forexample,LiJunhasbeenadoctorinmyhometownformanyyears
Thenwriteaboutwhatshelookslikeandwhatsheoftendoes
Inthesecondparagraphdescribehercharacter
Forexample,Sheiskindandconsiderateto
Thenexplainwhatkindofthingsshedoestohelppeople
Writemoreparagraphsifnecessary
Finallyexplainhowotherpeopleviewher,e
LiJunisapersonlove