作文专题训练一：看图作文（针砭时弊类）第一段：描述、解释或说明图画（必要时可用习语、谚语）1显然这幅画隐含着一个当今社会上普遍存在的现象。2正如图中（生动）描绘的那样，……3这幅图传递出的意思是……4从以上图画可以明显的看出……5很明显，图画的作者希望引起我们对……的注意第二段：分析导致问题的原因或提出解决问题的办法1导致这个现象（问题）的因素可能有几点。首先……，其次……，最后……。2这幅画所隐含的问题应该严肃对待。3这个现象（问题）已经引起了全社会的关注。4应该尽快采取切实可行的措施来解决该问题。第一……，第二……，第三……第三段：总结陈词1在我个人看来确实是到了该我们……的时候了2只有通过这种方式我们才能够……实战演习1：看下图作文要求：1简述图中内容；2提出解决办法；3不少于60词参考词汇：雾霾：haze,强制执行：enforce1实战演习2：看下图作文。要求：1简述图中内容；2谈谈你的看法；3不少于60词参考词汇：培训班：trainingclasses2实战演习1参考范文Ascanbeapparentlyseenfromtheabovepicture,thewholecityiscoveredwithhaze.Peoplehavetowearmasksinordertopreventthepollutedair.Thisphenomenonhasarousedgreatconcernofthewholesociety.Someurgentandyetpracticalmeasuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblemassoonaspossible.Firstofall,strictlawsshouldbeenforcedbythegovernmenttocontroltheemissionofpollutinggas.Furthermore,alargenumberoftreesshouldbeplanted,whichcandefinitelybenefitusalot.Lastbutnotleast,itisimportantforeveryonetolivealowcarbonlife.Onlyinthiswaycanweguaranteethecomfortandhappinessoffuturegenerations实战演习2参考范文Asisvividlydescribedinthepicture，toomuchworkmakesJackadullboy.Theboyhastogotosomanytrainingclasses,whichmakeshimtootiredtolearnanything.Itisquiteobviousthatthedrawerwishestodrawourattentiontotheheavyburdenofthestudents.Inmyopinion,spare-timetrainingcoursesareawasteoftimeformanystudents,becausetheyarenotinterestedinthematall.Pleasedon’tforcestudentstodowhattheyarenotwillingtoandreturnsometimetostudents,withwhichtheycandosomethingtheylike.Studentshavetherighttoenjoythemselvesafterclass!实战演习1参考范文Ascanbeapparentlyseenfromtheabovepicture,thewholecityiscoveredwithhaze.Peoplehavetowearmasksinordertopreventthepollutedair.Thisphenomenonhasarousedgreatconcernofthewholesociety.Someurgentandyetpracticalmeasuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblemassoonaspossible.Firstofall,strictlawsshouldbeenforcedbythegovernmenttocontroltheemissionofpollutinggas.Furthermore,alargenumberoftreesshouldbeplanted,whichcandefinitelybenefitusalot.Lastbutnotleast,itisimportantforeveryonetolivealowcarbonlife.Onlyinthiswaycanweguaranteethecomfortandhappinessoffuturegenerations实战演习2参考范文Asisvividlydescribedinthepicture，toomuchworkmakesJackadullboy.Theboyhastogotosomanytrainingclasses,whichmakeshimtootiredtolearnanything.Itisquiteobviousthatthedrawerwishestodrawourattentiontotheheavyburdenofthestudents.Inmyopinion,spare-timetrainingcoursesareawasteoftimeformanystudents,becausetheyarenotinterestedinthematall.Pleasedon’tforcestudentstodowhattheyarenotwillingtoandreturnsometimetostudents,withwhichtheycandosomethingtheylike.Studentshavetherighttoenjoythemselvesafterclass!3
