02/18/25重庆市实验中学欢迎您！高考英语作文优化重庆市实验中学刘志强Yesterdayishistory.Tomorrowisamystery.Buttodayisagift.Thatiswhyitiscalledthepresent!昨天已成追忆，明天还很神秘。现在是个礼物，它称之为今天。Yesterdayishistory.Tomorrowisamystery.Buttodayisagift.Thatiswhyitiscalledthepresent!要求：⑴就此材料发表你的看法；⑵紧扣材料，有明确的观点；⑶词数不少于60。写作：请结合材料，按要求用英语写作（15分）02/18/25学生原作：学生原作：Tomorrowwillbetter?Noonereallyknows.Yesterdaybringsusmemories.Wecanonlyhavetoday.Weliveinthemomenttomaketomorrownice.Timepassingby,itlikethewindblowthroughtheleaves.Itdoesn’tleaveanysigns.Wewantourdreamstoflyandletitgowiththewind.Oncetimeislosing,itwillneverbefoundagain.Byusingtimewell,wecanhaveabeautifulfuture.Let’smakegooduseoftoday.Let’scometrueourdream.重庆市高考英语书面表达评分标准第一档（1—3分）未达到总体要求。．未结合材料；．内容混乱，缺乏条理性；．语言运用差，错误很多，严重影响观点表达。第二档（4—7分）未达到总体要求。．未有效结合材料；．内容松散，条理性较差；．语言运用较差，错误较多，但基本能表达观点。重庆市高考英语书面表达评分标准第三档（8—11分）基本达到总体要求。．有效结合材料，观点基本明确；．内容基本连贯，有一定的条理性；．语言运用基本得体，有少量错误，但能表达观点。第四档（12—15分）很好地达到总体要求。．有效结合材料，观点明确；．内容连贯，条理清晰；．语言运用得体，词汇丰富，几乎没有语言错误。英语作文的常用优化技巧一.活用高级词汇，注重单句提升。二.善用经典句型，避免单调沉闷。四.使用三大从句，突显逻辑层次。三.运用稀有表达，深化句式变化。五.妙用非谓动词，提升句子形象。英语作文的常用优化技巧一.活用高级词汇，注重单句提升。1.ApplyingadvancedvocabularyisveryhelpfultoimprovingourEnglishcompositions.Applyingadvancedvocabulary_____________toimprovingourEnglishcompositions.isofgreathelp2.Oureffortstodayleadtotomorrow’ssuccess.Oureffortstoday___________tomorrow’ssuccess.contributetoOureffortstoday___________tomorrow’ssuccessresultin3.单句提升Sheisafamoussinger.(Trytoexpressitscertainty.)There’snodoubtthatsheisafamoussinger.Undoubtedly,sheisafamoussinger.Noonecandenythefactthatsheisafamoussinger.There’snodenyingthatsheisafamoussinger.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatsheisafamoussinger.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatsheisafamoussinger.英语作文的常用优化技巧二.善用经典句型，避免单调沉闷。1.Itis＋n./adj.＋for/ofsbtodosth2.Therebe句型及其变体Thereseemstobe…Thereisnodenyingthat…Thereexists…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisissue.人们对此问题观点各不相同。There____differentopinionsonthisissueamongpeople.exist3.祈使句＋and/or＋一般将来时4.倒装句Bynomeans＋部分倒装Onlyinthisway＋部分倒装Onlybydoing…＋部分倒装5.强调句型Itis…that/who…三.运用稀有表达，深化句式变化。英语作文的常用优化技巧1.肯定用否定表达I’mverytired.I’m_________tired.2.否定用肯定表达Hisperformanceisnotsatisfactory.Hisperformanceis________satisfactory.3.最高级用比较级表达Healthisthemostimportant.Nothingismoreimportantthanhealth.farfromnotalittle02/18/25找出错误，指找出错误，指出不足出不足Tomorrowwillbetter?Noonereallyknows.Yesterdaybringsusmemories.Wecanonlyhavetoday.Weliveinthemomenttomaketomorrownice.Timepassingby,itlikethewindblowthroughtheleaves.Itdoesn’tleaveanysigns.Wewantourdreamstoflyandletitgowiththewind.Oncetimeislosing,itwillneverbefoundagain.Byusingtimewell,wecanhaveabeautifulfuture.Let’smakegooduseoftoday.Let’scometrueourdream.02/18/25小组活动小组活动（四人一组，优化...
