WritingaletterIfyourfriendstartsmokingandaskyoutosmoketogether,whatshouldyoudo?Whatdidyousee?doharmtoCauseillness/disease/accidentabadhabit/wastemoneyAdviseher/himtostopsmoking/keepfriendshipCanyoutalkabouttheharmofsmoking?Dear…,Canyouhelpmeplease?Mybestfriendhasjuststartedsmoking.IdonotlikeitandItoldherwhatIthought.ShelaughedatmeandsaidthatIwasnotgrown-upenough.ThensheofferedmeacigaretteandIfeltsoembarrassedandawkward.Ididnotknowhowtorefuseit.Pleasehelpme.Idonotwanttostartsmoking,butIdonotwanttolosemybestfriend,either.YourssincerelyLixiaolei审题whatmustwepayattentiontowhenwritingtheletter?思考的问题分析Person(第几人称)Writingstyle(文章体裁)Writingtopic(文章主题)Writingorder(文章顺序)Writingtense(文章时态)thesecondperson（第二人称）Letterofsuggestion（建议信）Nosmoking/keepfriendship（Thelogicalorder（逻辑顺序）Thepresenttense(一般现在时）NosmokingdoharmtoCauseillness/disease/accidentabadhabit/wastemoneyKeepfriendshipgoodfriends/adviseherkeep/breakfriendshipstopsmokingWhatevershechoosesListkeypointsdoesharmtocausesdiseasesIsabadhabitPolishyoursentencesSentencepatternAdj./advMakesentencesSmokingPeopleSmokingSmokingSmokingwastesmoneySmokingcausesaccidents‘it”canbeusedassubjectAttributiveclausesmokingisabadhabit,doesharmtopeople’shealthcausingalotofdiseases,forexample,lungcancer.,itwastesmuchmoney.,carelesssmokersmaycausedangerousfires,smokingisharmful.formapassageLinkword.whichBesidessoMeanwhilewhichmeanwhilebesidesso熟悉结构巧用模板最终成文ThestructureofthisletterHeading(开头）---------Body（主体）------Ending(结尾）--------ExpressyourunderstandingandanalysisoftheproblemConvincingreasonsorevidenceGiveyourbestwishesAnalysisofproblem(分析问题）DearXiaolei,Iamsorryyouhavefoundyourselfinsuchadifficultsituation.first,thereisnoneedforyoutofeelembarrassedandawkward.shemaythinkthatsheisbehavinginagrownupway.HereissomeadvicethatIthinkyoumightgiveher.Asweallknow,smokingisabadhabit,whichdoesharmtopeople’shealthcausingalotofdiseases,forexamplelungcancer.Meanwhile,itwastemuchmoney.Besides,carelesssmokersmaycausedangerousfires,sosmokingisharmful.headingbodyBeginningsentences对对方理解/乐意帮忙PreparetogiveadviceSecond,talktoyourfriendgentlyandexplainthatyouarestillgoodfriendsanddon’twanttobreakthisfriendship.However,Iwillnotbeginsmokingtosuither.givehertheinformationaboveandthenexplainthatwhatevershechoosestodoyouwillremainherfriend.Don’tbedisappointed,XiaoleiGoodluckandbestwishes,LucyendingEndingsentences(祝愿）bodyHowtowritetheletterstepsreadtherequirementscarefullyandanalyzeitlistthekeypointsmakesentencesandpolishitformapassagethroughpassagepatternstep1step2step3step4表对对方的情况表示理解，并乐意帮忙：I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…I’mverygladto…andgiveyousomesuggestionsonhowto…Itismypleasuretodo…Itisapitythat…Iamsorrythat…提建议的句式Youcando…Itisuseful/helpful/important/necessary…foryoutodo…Inmyopinion,itwouldbebetterifyoudo…Itshouldbeagoodideaforyoutodo…Itwillcertainlyhelpalottodosth.Italsohelpstodosth.Itdoesharmtosb./sth.=Itisharmfulto……benefits…=…bebeneficialto…=…dogoodto…Thefollowingismyview/opinionsHereissomeadvicethat….表意见并列的连词Firstly,Aboveall,Firstofall,Besides,…Inaddition,…Moreover,…Ingeneral,…Personally,Inmyopinion,…Ihopetohearfromyousoon.Ihopetohearfromyousoon.Ilookforwardtoournextmeeting.Ilookforwardtoournextmeeting.Hopingforanearlyreply.Hopingforanearlyreply.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.YouhavemybestwishesforyourYouhavemybestwishesforyourWithgoodwishGoodluckandbestwishes结束语假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：⑴参加中文学习班；⑵看中文书刊、电视；⑶学唱中文歌曲；⑷交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell._________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHuaDearBob,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)I'mlookingforwardto(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHuaDearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.Iamlookingforwardtoyourletter.Sincerelyyours,LiHua
