书面表达 第第 3434 课时 课时 (( 半半 ) ) 开放作文开放作文八 (2011· 湖北卷 ) 请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。 Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork. Teamwork shows us how other people's roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.注意：① 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；② 除诗歌外，文体不限；③ 内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；④ 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；⑤ 词数为 100 左右。标杆作文 Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me. In fact, I didn't realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. At first, I did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities. As a result, I was tired out and depressed. Then I turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and had everyone do their part in class. It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and makes my work more efficient. 这是一篇半开放式作文，要求考生结合校园生活的一个事例，谈谈与人合作的话题，都是要结合一个例子写一个话题作文，所以这种作文一般采用议论，记叙，再总结议论的形式。但是对于这类型的文章，题目中并没有给出很多的汉语提示，所以对于学生来说，要做到有话可说，有文字可写还是要扩散自己的思维，自己增加相关信息，只有这样，才能充实一篇文章。另外，要注意一些高级词汇、句式的运用，亮点提分。当然，篇幅、字迹以及卷面也是要达到的最基本要求。范文点评 首段提出与人合作现象引出话题，中间段举一个与人合作的例子，实际就是记叙文，末段是你对合作的看法和认识，是议论文。就像去年的微笑一样，首段引出微笑，中间段举一个微笑的例子，末段是微笑对人的生活所起的作用和你的看法以...
