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假如你是李华 , 你的美国朋友 Alice 听说中国的中小学正在实施素质教育 , 来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写封回信，谈一谈“素质教育”实施后你们学校生活发生的变化。应试教育素质教育上课：听讲，做笔记上课：课堂活跃，研究学习，能力培养， 有时学生当老师课外活动： 做不完的作业课外活动：开展各种类型的活动：唱歌跳舞，球类活动，电脑学习，英语角…晚上：继续做作业至深夜晚上： 看新闻，做实验，各学科讨论注意： 1 、写信日期为 2004 年 2 月 20 日； 2 、词数： 100 左右； 3 、注意书信格式。Dear Alice, You said that you wanted to know something about quality-oriented education. So I will talk about quality-oriented and exam-oriented education. At last , we only could listen our teachers and make notes. After classes we had a lot homeworks to do. It took us much time on it at night. But now, in class, we can discuss questions with teacher. Students are all like to study. Sometime we also could play a teacher. We don’t have so many homeworks. So we have enough time to do all kinds of activities, for example, singing, playing balls, English coner, and so on. At night , we can see news, do experiments… Yours, Li Hua 2004, 2, 20 Incorrect letter form; Spelling mistakes; Grammatical mistakes; The passage is wordy; Think in Chinese and write in Chinglish; No effective conjunctionsCommon problems:Dear Alice: Yours,Feb 20, 2004Li HuaIncorrect letter form,Spelling mistakes: Our school life was quite boiling. We only made notices and lessoned in class. A lot of activists take the place of the homework. But now things are difficult from it. We do experiences and discussion the subjects. boringnoteslistenedactivitiesdifferentexperimentsdiscuss In class, exam-oriented education made us to listen the teachers and make notes Comparing with that, quality-o...