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How to write a good articleBy Allen下面三幅图体现的是学生的课外学习、课余活动和社会实践活动三方面的课外生活。请写一篇题为 My out-of-class Activities 的短文，并分别写出你的感受以及你对整个开外活动的看法。字数 120 个左右I am a student. I study at Chabei Senior Middle School. We have a lot of out-of-class activities. Some students like reading, some like planting trees, and others like playing football. I like playing basketball. I think Planting trees is the most important thing. Out-of-activities is good. It can make our body strong. It can open our minds. It can make us feel relax. It can make us help each other. If you don’t take part in it, you will become unhealthy. You can’t study well. We can make our school life colorful only in this way. It is helpful to us students. 一。注意分层。把握时态。二。合理使用动词或动词短语1 。避免使用相同词汇，增加表达的新颖性Some like reading and some like cooking, but I like playing games.Some like reading and some enjoy cooking, but I am fond of playing games.2 。使用助动词增强文章的感情色彩I went there but I didn’t see you.I did go there but I didn’t see you.3 。多用词组表达单个词义John was killed in the accident.John lost his life in the accident.三。注意在写作中使用起、承、转、合的短语1 。个人观点： in my opinion, as far as I know, in short, in a word, generally speaking, on the whole, to tell the truth, to be honest.2 。解释、说明： that is to say, namely, in other words, according to, in fact, as a matter of fact.3 。时间、顺序 : for one thing, for another, on the other hand, in the end, at last4 。递进、强调 :besides, in addition, what is more, worse still, to make things worse,What is worse, above all, at the same time.5 。并列、选择 :both…and, as well as, neither...