七种提分的写作技巧1不要总是以有生命的名词或人称代词开头[例1]Peopleexperiencemanygreatchangesinthelasthalfcentury.低分Overthelasthalfcenturythepaceofchangeinthelifeofhumanbeingshasincreasedbeyondourwildestexpectation.高分[例2]Studentsshouldcertainlymakecontinuousefforts.低分Continuouseffortsonthepartofstudentsarecertainlyrequired.高分技巧：找到原句中的非生命的名词短语，把它变成主语。[例3]birthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.低分Itiswidely/commonlythought/believed/held/acceptedthatbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.高分技巧：使用主语从句。Manypeoplethink=Itiswidely/commonlythought/believed/held/accepted..[例4]Moreandmorepeopleagree/realize/areawarethatwomenshouldenjoyfullequalitywithmen.低分Thereisagrowingagreement/realization/awarenessthatwomenshouldenjoyfullequalitywithmen.高分技巧：使用存在句therebe句型。Moreandmorepeopleagree/realize/areawarethat...=Thereisagrowingagreement/realization/awarenessthat...[例5]ManyChinesepeoplehavegonetotheUnitedstatesinthepast15years.低分Thepast15yearshavebroughtmanyChinesepeopletotheUnitedStates.高分技巧：用时间词作主语。效果非常好。如：Thelasthalfofthe20thcenturyhasseen/witnessedmanygreatbreakthroughsineveryaspect.1.英语中被动句的使用频率远远高于汉语。[例1]Theymakealotofinnovationstomakemoneyforafewpeople.低分Alotofinnovationsaremadetowiththeaimofmakingmoneyforafewpeople.高分技巧：宾语变主语。[例2]Wemaythinkmoreoftheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.低分Morethoughtmaybegiventotheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.高分技巧：动词变名词。2.不要总是用“如果”、“因为”、“当”等口语意味较重的句子；不要对动词过于依赖，要学会名词或介词结构来表达意思。[例1]Evenifyoubelievechangeisinevitable,thisdoesnotmean“changeisalwaysforthebetter”.低分However,reachingtheconclusionthatchangeisevitableisnotthesameasassumingthat“changeisalwaysforthebetter”.高分技巧：使用同位语从句。[例1]Ifyoucomparebicycleswithcarscarefully,youwillfindbicyclesaresuperiortocars.低分Carefulcomparisonofbicycleswithcarswillshowthesuperiorityoftheformeroverthelatter.高分[例2]Ifweonlyapplybookknowledge,wewillnotgetgoodresults.低分Theapplicationofbookknowledgealonewon’tbringyougoodresults.高分[例3]Ifwecanbetterunderstandthegreaterpressureofthepopulationgrowth,wewillhaveacorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.低分Abetterunderstandingofthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowthisessentialtoacorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.高分[例4]IfwearewatchingtoomuchTV,ourreadingabilitywillbeseriouslyaffected.低分HeavyexposuretoTVwillexertanegativeeffectonourreadingability.高分[例5]Whenawomanseesthatsheisgoingtobelaidoff,shebeginstoworryalldayandnight.低分Themereprospectoflay-offwouldsetawomantoworryalldayandnight.高分[例6]Becausewecannotapplybookknowledgetopractice,wecannothandlerealproblemsinsociety.低分Theinabilitytoapplybookknowledgetopracticepreventedusfromhandlingrealproblemsinsociety.高分技巧：把动词改成名词。3.不要总是用肯定句来表达，要学会用否定句来表达肯定的意思。[例1]Everyyoungboyandgirlwantstoearnalittlemoneytohelpcoverhighercollegecost.低分Thereishardlyayoungboyandgirlwhodoesnotwanttoearnalittlemoneytohelpcovercollegecost.高分技巧：every=hardly+not[例2]Foodisthemostbasicissuetoindividualandnationalsurvival.低分Noissueisasbasictoindividualandnationalsurvivalasfood.高分技巧：最高级=notas...as[例3]Wheneveryoupickupanewspaper,youwillfindadvertisements.低分Itisimpossibletopickupanews...
