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这是我的摘要练习。原文太长了没法弄过来。请帮忙大概看一下wording,和cohesivelanguage以及layout有没有需要改进的地方。不用改的太仔细，万分感谢。SummarizewritingTest1ofALBUM3EvaluatingtheperformanceoftheboardStructureanalysis:(1)交代现状引出话题：theboardappraisal(2)Boardappraisal的作用和重要性-----------------------------------------------------(3)Boardappraisal在大公司和小公司实施的情况(4)怎样执行boardappraisal.(5)一些列举大公司的方法。-------------------------------------------------------(6)待解决的问题。(7)表绩效评价的单词：appraisal/performancereview/assessPassage:Whileappraisalforemployeeshasbeenwidely-appliedbymanycompanies,fewprocedureshavebeenestablishedtoassesstheperformanceofdirectors,whichisparticularlytruewithcompaniesofsmallsize.However,expertsbelievesthatreviewingtheperformanceofdirectorsisabsolutelyessentialasitnotonlybuildsafairatmosphereatworkplacebyincludingthedirectorsintheappraisallist,butalsooffersthedirectorsopportunitiestoexchangeideasanddiscussissues.Insmallcompanies,theboardappraisalisusuallydeemedasapositivemeanstoavoidmakingbasicmistakes,thusiseasiertooperatethanisinlargecompanieswherethedirectorstendtoviewthisprocedureasachallengetotheirstatus.Toconducttheboardappraisaleffectively,itisrecommendedtoestablishasystematicmannercombiningboththecommentsfromthechairmanandpeers,andself-assessment.Insomelargecompanies,theboardappraisalisusuallyimplementedthrougheitherinformaltalkwithchairmanoropensessionsofthedirectors.Aalternativemethodisquestionnairestoalldirectorsaimingatsolicitingtheiropinionsontheperformanceoftheboard.Despitetheimprovement（不可数？）hasbeenmadeintheconductionofboardappraisal,furtherproblemslike“whoistoappraisethechairman?”havearoseasnewconcerns.----------------206wordsBritishcompaniescrosstheATLANTICSubject:介绍一个tradeinitiative(这具体是什么意思啊？),引出近年英国进军美国市场的经验总结Structureanalysis:(1)宣布活动，介绍活动的目的及特色//(2)列举近年来英国公司进军美国公司的失败例子(3)分析失败的原因//(4)给出相应对策//-------------------------------------------------------Passage:Ahigh-profiletradeinitiativewillbetakingplacenextmonthwiththeultimategoaltopromoteBritishproductstoAmericanmarket.Thistradeinitiativeisdistinguishedbyfocusingonthemarketpositioningand(the?)considerableemphasis(emphases?)onsupportingnichebusinesses.ThesemajorconcernsofthetradeinitiativewerebroughtunderspotlightduetosomeembarrassingexperiencesofBritishcompaniesduringtheirventuresinUS.Carringtons,awell-establishedretailgroup,endeditsgrandbusinessplaninUSwithacommercialdisaster.AndtheAmericanexpansionplanofPollyBrown,anotherprestigiousbrand,alsofailedduetothedebacleofpositioningitsproductsinthemiddlemarket.Theseunexpectedfailures,aspointedoutbySarahScott,mainlyresultedfromthepatronizingattitudeofmostBritishfirmsandthelackofthoroughmarketresearch.SarahalsorecommendedthatBritishfirmswhowanttosucceedinUSshouldconcentrateonthenichemarketandbuildareputationasasupplierofuniquegoodsratherthanstruggletoaccessthemiddlemarketthathasalreadybeenfullyoccupiedbydomesticfirmsofUS.---------------------------------------------------176---------------------StaffappraisalsStructureanalysis:(1)简单交代现状，引出主题：staffappraisal作用很大(2)目前实施中存在的问题，以及导致的后果(3)如何有效执行，给出两个建议(4)执行者manager的问题，和原因(5)总结段Passage：Staffappraisalsproveenormous...