PeriodSixWriting—Writingaproposal本单元的写作要求是写一封建议信。建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信有可能是写给个人——就遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法，也可能是写给某个组织或机构——就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要和缓。其基本结构为：首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段：提出具体建议。同时用事实来证明建议的正确性和必要性。尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，表达希望建议得以采纳、问题得以解决的愿望。1．I’msorrytoknowthatyouhavesometrouble/difficulty/problemsin...afterreadingyourletter.2．I’mwritingtopersuadeyouto...3．Firstofall，Ithinkitwouldbebetterif...4．HereI’dliketogivemyadviceon.../Iwouldliketosuggestthat...5．IfIwereyou，Iwould...6．Thereasonwhy...isthat...7．Pleasetakemyadviceintoconsiderationandmakeafinaldecision.8．Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.某国际购物中心拟建立“无烟超市”，从“本商场不出售香烟”入手，号召广大顾客在本商场购物期间不吸烟。但是来自美国的Smith经理又考虑到个人权利和自由问题，怕影响商场的经营。因此他想先征求大家的意见。假设你是李华，请你给该商场的经理写一封150词左右的书信，表达自己的观点，并简单陈述理由。1．时态：本文以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，个别地方也可能用到现在完成时或现在进行时等。2．人称：以第一、第二人称为主，少数句子中会用到第三人称。3．目的：表达个人观点并陈述理由。必备词汇1．国际购物中心aninternationalshoppingcenter2．无烟超市NonsmokingSupermarket3．在我看来inmyopinion/view4．不但……而且……notonly...butalso...5．对……有好处dogoodto...6．放弃giveup7．作为回报inreturn8．另外inaddition9．总而言之allinall10．正相反onthecontrary句式升级1．它可以帮助吸烟者少吸烟，对其他顾客的健康也有好处。Itcanhelpthesmokerstosmokelessanditcanalsodogoodtoothercustomers’health.Notonlycanithelpthesmokerstosmokeless，butitcanalsodogoodtoothercustomers’health.(notonly...butalso...)2．他们会很高兴听从你的建议，不会再考虑自己的权利和自由了。Theywillbehappytofollowyoursuggestionsandtheywon’tconsidertheirownrightsandfreedomagain.Theywillbehappytofollowyoursuggestions，notconsideringtheirownrightsandfreedomagain.(现在分词短语作伴随状语)3．另外，在购物中心吸烟可能导致火灾，对于你的财产和顾客都是非常危险的。Inaddition，smokingintheshoppingcentermaycausefireanditisverydangerousforbothyourpossessionsandthecustomers.Inaddition，smokingintheshoppingcentermaycausefire，whichisverydangerousforbothyourpossessionsandthecustomers.(非限制性定语从句)参考范文DearMrSmith，I’mverygladtohearthatyourinternationalshoppingcenterwillbuilda“Non-smokingSupermarket”．Inmyopinion，itisagoodideatodoso，fornotonlycanithelpthesmokerstosmokeless，butitcanalsodogoodtoothercustomers’healthwhiletheyaredoingsomeshoppingthere.Sinceyouhavegivenupsomebenefitsbynotsellingcigarettes，thesmokersaremostlikelytosupportyouinreturn.Theywillbehappytofollowyoursuggestions，notconsideringtheirownrightsandfreedomagain.Inaddition，smokingintheshoppingcentermaycausefire，whichisverydangerousforbothyourpossessionsandthecustomers.Allinall，the“Non-smokingSupermarket”willnotaffectyourbusiness.Onthecontrary，itwillhelpyoutoattractmorecustomerswhowanttokeephealthy.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely，LiHua
