第三讲润色习作的3种高效策略精准选词,妙笔生花从书面表达的评分标准中可以看出,恰当选用贴切、地道的高级词汇对提高书面表达的得分非常重要。写作时恰当使用一些大多数考生有可能想不到的词汇,恰当地求新求异或使用较为高级的短语、习语等来代替普通词汇,可以提高文章的得分档次。为写作增添色彩。请考生牢记并熟练运用下面的词汇。一、选用高级词汇“四原则”1.具体性原则在具备一定词汇量的条件下,具体的表达比泛泛而谈的内容更能引起阅卷人的共鸣。例如:当描述一个具体事物或人时,类似anice/goodman的表达让人感觉很空洞,我们可以用有个性的,具体的词描绘一个人,如kindhearted(好心的);generous(慷慨的;大方的);easygoing(随和的)等。再如:Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedagoodatmosphere.→Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.2.新颖性原则写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇,会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbedifficult.→Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbechallenging.3.短语优先原则多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesummervacationandI'dlikeyoutohelpme.→IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesummervacationandI'dlikeyoutodomeafavor.(全国卷Ⅰ·书面表达)4.避免重复原则尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词,必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate...Ifyouwanttoparticipate,youcansendyourphotostointlphotoshow@gmschool.com.→Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate...Ifyouwanttojoin,youcansendyourphotostointlphotoshow@gmschool.com.(全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)二、高级词汇积累45例1.另外besides→inaddition/what'smore2.总之inaword→tosumup/inconclusion/insummary3.但是but→however4.机会chance→opportunity5.选择choice→alternative6.考虑consider→takeintoaccount/consideration7.最终finally→eventually8.勤奋的hardworking→diligent9.分发handout→distribute10.后果result→consequence11.应该should→besupposedto12.决定decide→makeupone'smind13.理解understand→makesenseof/figureout14.可用的usable→available15.使用use→employ/makeuseof16.艰难的difficult→painstaking17.改正,修改correct→polish18.不同的different→various19.想要want→intend20.做,从事do→takeup21.获得get→gain22.记住remember→keepinmind23.种类繁多allkindsof→awiderangeof24.和and→aswellas25.反对beagainst→objectto26.厌烦beboredwith→befedupwith27.忙于bebusyin/with→beoccupiedin/with28.发生happen→occur/comeabout29.提高improve→promote30.重要的important→vital31.立即immediately→inaflash32.参加join→participate33.巨大的large→enormous34.有意义的meaningful→rewarding35.许多many→alargequantityof36.明显的obvious→apparent37.合适的proper→appropriate38.丰富的rich→abundant39.与……不同bedifferentfrom→differ/varyfrom40.渴望做……beeagertodo→bedyingtodo/longtodo41.因为becauseof→onaccountof42.闻名befamousfor→haveareputationfor43.越来越多moreandmore→anincreasingnumberof44.感到舒心feelcomfortable→feelatease45.成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit[题组过关1]——升级文中加黑词汇Deareditor,Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmore(1.________)Chinesepeoplearemakingatripathomeandabroad,whichmakesusnotonlyenjoymorebeautifulscenerybutalsolearnmoreaboutthecultureandthecustomsoftheplaceswevisit.Unfortunately,someofusshoutloudly,litterorspitinpublic,whichhasharmed(2.________)thegoodreputationofusChinese.Inmyopinion,whengoingontrips,wes...