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第三讲润色习作的3种高效策略精准选词，妙笔生花从书面表达的评分标准中可以看出，恰当选用贴切、地道的高级词汇对提高书面表达的得分非常重要。写作时恰当使用一些大多数考生有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异或使用较为高级的短语、习语等来代替普通词汇，可以提高文章的得分档次。为写作增添色彩。请考生牢记并熟练运用下面的词汇。一、选用高级词汇“四原则”1．具体性原则在具备一定词汇量的条件下，具体的表达比泛泛而谈的内容更能引起阅卷人的共鸣。例如：当描述一个具体事物或人时，类似anice/goodman的表达让人感觉很空洞，我们可以用有个性的，具体的词描绘一个人，如kindhearted(好心的)；generous(慷慨的；大方的)；easygoing(随和的)等。再如：Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedagoodatmosphere.→Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.2．新颖性原则写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。Inthecomingthreeyears，ourschoollifewillbedifficult.→Inthecomingthreeyears，ourschoollifewillbechallenging.3．短语优先原则多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesummervacationandI'dlikeyoutohelpme.→IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesummervacationandI'dlikeyoutodomeafavor.(全国卷Ⅰ·书面表达)4．避免重复原则尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate...Ifyouwanttoparticipate，youcansendyourphotostointlphotoshow@gmschool.com.→Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate...Ifyouwanttojoin，youcansendyourphotostointlphotoshow@gmschool.com.(全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)二、高级词汇积累45例1．另外besides→inaddition/what'smore2．总之inaword→tosumup/inconclusion/insummary3．但是but→however4．机会chance→opportunity5．选择choice→alternative6．考虑consider→takeintoaccount/consideration7．最终finally→eventually8．勤奋的hardworking→diligent9．分发handout→distribute10．后果result→consequence11．应该should→besupposedto12．决定decide→makeupone'smind13．理解understand→makesenseof/figureout14．可用的usable→available15．使用use→employ/makeuseof16．艰难的difficult→painstaking17．改正，修改correct→polish18．不同的different→various19．想要want→intend20．做，从事do→takeup21．获得get→gain22．记住remember→keepinmind23．种类繁多allkindsof→awiderangeof24．和and→aswellas25．反对beagainst→objectto26．厌烦beboredwith→befedupwith27．忙于bebusyin/with→beoccupiedin/with28．发生happen→occur/comeabout29．提高improve→promote30．重要的important→vital31．立即immediately→inaflash32．参加join→participate33．巨大的large→enormous34．有意义的meaningful→rewarding35．许多many→alargequantityof36．明显的obvious→apparent37．合适的proper→appropriate38．丰富的rich→abundant39．与……不同bedifferentfrom→differ/varyfrom40．渴望做……beeagertodo→bedyingtodo/longtodo41．因为becauseof→onaccountof42．闻名befamousfor→haveareputationfor43．越来越多moreandmore→anincreasingnumberof44．感到舒心feelcomfortable→feelatease45．成功做某事succeedindoingsth.→makeit[题组过关1]——升级文中加黑词汇Deareditor，Withthedevelopmentofeconomy，moreandmore(1.________)Chinesepeoplearemakingatripathomeandabroad，whichmakesusnotonlyenjoymorebeautifulscenerybutalsolearnmoreaboutthecultureandthecustomsoftheplaceswevisit.Unfortunately，someofusshoutloudly，litterorspitinpublic，whichhasharmed(2.________)thegoodreputationofusChinese.Inmyopinion，whengoingontrips，wes...