专题限时集训(二十八)短文改错(Ⅲ)A(2020·重庆市诊断性考试)Lastsemester,myroommatesandIshootafilmtoobservethe70thanniversaryofourmotherland.Thefilmwasmadeofsoloperformances.Iwasoneofthesolosinger,andIhadpracticedveryhardforit.Twogirlsdesignedthedancetoenrichthefilm.Beside,ourEnglishteacherjoinedus,provideduswithlotsofhelp.Thefilm'ssuccesswastrueateameffort.Everyonetakingpartinlearnedagreatdealfromitanddeterminedtoworkharder.Ourcountry'srapiddevelopmentmakesitpossibleofustogrowupwithgoodlivingconditions.Wewillshouldertheresponsibilitiesofcontributingtoyourcountry.【答案】Lastsemester,myroommatesandIafilmtoobservethe70thanniversaryofourmotherland.Thefilmwasmade\s\up12(∧)ofsoloperformances.Iwasoneofthesolo，andIhadpracticedveryhardforit.Twogirlsdesigneddancetoenrichthefilm.，ourEnglishteacherjoinedus,uswithlotsofhelp.Thefilm'ssuccesswasateameffort.Everyonetakingpartlearnedagreatdealfromitanddeterminedtoworkharder.Ourcountry'srapiddevelopmentmakesitpossibleustogrowupwithgoodlivingconditions.Wewillshouldertheresponsibilitiesofcontributingtocountry.B(2020·郑州市第二次质量预测)RecentlyIbecameaddictedtolearnmorelanguagesapartfromEnglish.OnceIsawapostofferingawonderfulcourseinGerman,andthatwasjustwhatIdecidedtotakefromanewlanguage.Whiletheroomforclasseswasquitesmall,buttherewasawholeworldoflanguagetoexplore.Ourteacher,Mrs.Haus,wasatall,thinandquietlady.I'llneverforgetthedaywhichsheintroducedherself.Sheneveronceraisedvoice,buttheminuteshebegantospeak,theroomfellsilently.Why?ShelovedGermananditsculture—andeverybodyinherclassescouldn'thelpbutfellinlovewiththelanguage,too.WealladmirethewayshetalkedaboutdifferentGermanfoodsandtradition.ThenIrealizedwhatmakesthegoodteacher.It'ssomeonewhoisinlovewithwhatheorsheisteaching!【答案】RecentlyIbecameaddictedtomorelanguagesapartfromEnglish.OnceIsawapostofferingawonderfulcourseinGerman,andthatwasjustwhatIdecidedtotakeanewlanguage.Whiletheroomforclasseswasquitesmall,therewasawholeworldoflanguagetoexplore.Ourteacher,Mrs.Haus,wasatall,thinandquietlady.I'llneverforgetthedaysheintroducedherself.Sheneveronceraised\s\up12(∧)voice,buttheminuteshebegantospeak,theroomfell.Why?ShelovedGermananditsculture—andeverybodyinherclassescouldn'thelpbutinlovewiththelanguage,too.WeallthewayshetalkedaboutdifferentGermanfoodsand.ThenIrealizedwhatmakesgoodteacher.It'ssomeonewhoisinlovewithwhatheorsheisteaching!C(2020·绵阳市第三次诊断性考试)Everyonehasadream.Sodome.WhenIgrowup，it'smydreamtobeascientist.Asthematteroffact，beingascientisthadbeenoneofmydreamssincemychildhoodbecausescientistsarethemostknowledgeableandselflessinmymind.Theydevotethemselvestohelpworkoutdifficultprobleminourlife.Theyworkhardlytohelppeopleinneed，askingnothinginreturn.Sciencecanpushforwardthedevelopmentoftheworld，andI'msureIwillmaketheworldgoodifIcanbecomeascientist.Iknowitwillbenoeasyjob.Therefore，Ibelievemydreamwillbecometrue.【答案】Everyonehasadream.Sodo.WhenIgrowup,it'smydreamtobeascientist.Asmatteroffact,beingascientistbeenoneofmydreamssincemychildhoodbecausescientistsarethemostknowledgeableandselflessinmymind.Theydevotethemselvestoworkoutdifficultinourlife.Theyworktohelppeopleinneed,asking\s\up12(∧)nothinginreturn.Sciencecanpushforwardthedevelopmentoftheworld,andI'msureIwillmaketheworldifIcanbecomeascientist.Iknowitwillbenoeasyjob.，Ibelievemydreamwillcometrue.D(2020·厦门市质检)Lifecanbetoughsometimesbecausethereisalwayssomethingunexpectedhappened,whichmaytireorevenstopus.However,wecan'tchoosetoescape.Wearesupposedtakeresponsibilityforourselvesandourfamilies.Severalyearago,myfatherlostmyjobandwasunemployedforalongtime.Sohedidn'ttakeitseriously.Instead,hebelievedhehadanenoughtimetorestandthinkabouthowtomakeanewlyliving.Nowhehadreceivedawellpaidjoboffer.So,whenyouarefacedwithchallenges,choosingtobelievegoodthingsareintheway.【答案】Lifecanbetoughsometimesbecausethereisalwayssomethingunexpected，whichmaytireorevenstopus.However,wecan'tchoosetoescape.Wearesupposed\s\up12(∧)takeresponsibilityforourselvesandourfamilies.Severalago,myfatherlostjobandwasunemployedforalongtime.hedidn'ttakeitseriously.Instead,hebelievedhehadenoughtimetorestandthinkabouthowtomakealiving.Nowhereceivedawellpaidjoboffer.So,whenyouarefacedwithchallenges,tobelievegoodthingsaretheway.
