专题限时训练(四十四)[议论文型短文改错](一)Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcerningabouttheirhealth,buthowtokeephealth?First,itisnecessarytotakeanyexerciseeveryday.Researchshowsthatgetplentyofexercisemakestheheartbeatfastandthelungsworkharder.Second,eatmorefruits,vegetableandlessmeat.Third,gettingridofbadhabitsassmokinganddrinkingisalsoimportantwaytokeephealthy.Smokingandalcoholdrinkinginjuresone'shealthagreatdeal,andthereforeshouldbegivenup.Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfit,they'llgreatimprovetheirhealth.(二)Nowadays，peopleinmanybigcitiesarecomplainingtheheavytraffic.Ithasseriousinfluencedpeopledailylifeandeconomicdevelopment.Tosolvetheproblem，somepiecesofadviceisputforward.Somepeoplesuggestthatmorestreetsandroadsarebuilt.Bythisway，thetrafficdensitycanbereduced,thusspeedinguptheflowofbusesandcars.Somepeopleadviselimitingthenumberofbikesandcars.Thiscandecreasethetrafficflow.Butontheotherhand,thiswilleffecttheconsumptionandmakesbusesmorecrowded.Inmyopinion，thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputunderthecontrol.Andatthesametime，busesshouldhavetheirownspecialroutescannotbeusedbyothervehicles.(三)Weseniorschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains.Takesomeofmyclassmateforexample，theyoftenfeelupsetbecausetheexpectationsfromparents，endlesshomeworkandthepressureofexams.Theseseriousaffecttheirphysicalandmentalwellbeing.Therefore，Ithinkaboutitquitenecessarytotakemeasurestorelievethepains.First，thatisagoodideatohavehearttohearttalkswithourparents，tellthemwewon'tdisappointthem.Meanwhile，it'sadvisabletosparesometimetotakesomeexercisebesideourdevotiontothestudiessothatwewillalwaysfeelrelaxingandenergetic.Aslongaswewerefullyprepared，wearesuretoachievegreatsuccessinmyacademicperformance.(四)Asweallknowit,manychildrenhavetospendtheirweekendsandholidaysattendingvarioustrainingcoursesthoughtheyareunwillingto.That'swhytheirparentsdon'twanthimtofallbehindatthestartingline.Instead,theyhopetheirchildrenareequippingwithasmanyskillsaspossible.Thereforetheywon'tlosefaceswhencomparingtheirchildrenwithothers'.Beside,theyaresuretheseextraclasseswillhelptheirchildrentostandbyandbecomemorecompetitivein第1页/总3页thefuture.Actually,itwasunwisetoforcechildrentodowhattheydon'tlike.Toomanytrainingclasseswillbeheavyburdenforchildren.Parentsshouldn'tpushtheirchildrentoohardly.第2页/总3页专题限时训练(四十四)(一)Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcerningabouttheirhealth,buthowtokeephealth？First,itisnecessarytotakeanyexerciseeveryday.Researchshowsthatgetplentyofexercisemakestheheartbeatfastandthelungsworkharder.Second,eatmorefruits,vegetableandlessmeat.Third,gettingridofbadhabitsassmokinganddrinkingisalso∧importantwaytokeephealthy.Smokingandalcoholdrinkinginjuresone'shealthagreatdeal,andthereforeshouldbegivenup.Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfit,they'llgreatimprovetheirhealth.(二)Nowadays，peopleinmanybigcitiesarecomplaining∧theheavytraffic.Ithasseriousinfluencedpeopledailylifeandeconomicdevelopment.Tosolvetheproblem，somepiecesofadviceisputforward.Somepeoplesuggestthatmorestreetsandroadsarebuilt.Bythisway，thetrafficdensitycanbereduced,thusspeedinguptheflowofbusesandcars.Somepeopleadviselimitingthenumberofbikesandcars.Thiscandecreasethetrafficflow.Butontheotherhand,thiswilleffecttheconsumptionandmakesbusesmorecrowded.Inmyopinion，thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputunderthe[KG2mm]control.Andatthesametime，busesshouldhavetheirownspecialroutes∧cannotbeusedbyothervehicles.(三)Weseniorschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains.Takesomeofmyclassmateforexample，theyoftenfeelupsetbecause∧theexpectationsfromparents，endlesshomeworkandthepressureofexams.Theseseriousaffecttheirphysicalandmentalwellbeing.Therefore，Ithinkabout[KG2mm]itquitenecessarytotakemeasurestorelievethepains.First，thatisagoodideatohaveheartto-hearttalkswithourparents，tellthemwewon'tdisappointthem.Meanwhile，it'sadvisabletosparesometimetotakesomeexercisebesideourdevotiontothestudiessothatwewillalwaysfeelrelaxingandenergetic.Aslongaswewerefullyprepared，wearesuretoachievegreatsuccessinmyacademicperformance.(四)Asweallknowit[KG1mm],manychildrenhavetospendtheirweekendsandholidaysattendingvarioustrainingcoursesthoughtheyareunwillingto.That'swhytheirparentsdon'twanthimtofallbehindatthestartingline.Instead,theyhopetheirchildrenareequippingwithasmanyskillsaspossible.Thereforetheywon'tlosefaceswhencomparingtheirchildrenwithothers'.Beside，theyaresuretheseextraclasseswillhelptheirchildrentostandbyandbecomemorecompetitiveinthefuture.Actually,itwasunwisetoforcechildrentodowhattheydon'tlike.Toomanytrainingclasseswillbe∧heavyburdenforchildren.Parentsshouldn'tpushtheirchildrentoohardly.第3页/总3页
