专题限时训练(四十四)[议论文型短文改错](一)Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcerningabouttheirhealth,buthowtokeephealth?First,itisnecessarytotakeanyexerciseeveryday.Researchshowsthatgetplentyofexercisemakestheheartbeatfastandthelungsworkharder.Second,eatmorefruits,vegetableandlessmeat.Third,gettingridofbadhabitsassmokinganddrinkingisalsoimportantwaytokeephealthy.Smokingandalcoholdrinkinginjuresone'shealthagreatdeal,andthereforeshouldbegivenup.Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfit,they'llgreatimprovetheirhealth.(二)Nowadays,peopleinmanybigcitiesarecomplainingtheheavytraffic.Ithasseriousinfluencedpeopledailylifeandeconomicdevelopment.Tosolvetheproblem,somepiecesofadviceisputforward.Somepeoplesuggestthatmorestreetsandroadsarebuilt.Bythisway,thetrafficdensitycanbereduced,thusspeedinguptheflowofbusesandcars.Somepeopleadviselimitingthenumberofbikesandcars.Thiscandecreasethetrafficflow.Butontheotherhand,thiswilleffecttheconsumptionandmakesbusesmorecrowded.Inmyopinion,thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputunderthecontrol.Andatthesametime,busesshouldhavetheirownspecialroutescannotbeusedbyothervehicles.(三)Weseniorschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains.Takesomeofmyclassmateforexample,theyoftenfeelupsetbecausetheexpectationsfromparents,endlesshomeworkandthepressureofexams.Theseseriousaffecttheirphysicalandmentalwellbeing.Therefore,Ithinkaboutitquitenecessarytotakemeasurestorelievethepains.First,thatisagoodideatohavehearttohearttalkswithourparents,tellthemwewon'tdisappointthem.Meanwhile,it'sadvisabletosparesometimetotakesomeexercisebesideourdevotiontothestudiessothatwewillalwaysfeelrelaxingandenergetic.Aslongaswewerefullyprepared,wearesuretoachievegreatsuccessinmyacademicperformance.(四)Asweallknowit,manychildrenhavetospendtheirweekendsandholidaysattendingvarioustrainingcoursesthoughtheyareunwillingto.That'swhytheirparentsdon'twanthimtofallbehindatthestartingline.Instead,theyhopetheirchildrenareequippingwithasmanyskillsaspossible.Thereforetheywon'tlosefaceswhencomparingtheirchildrenwithothers'.Beside,theyaresuretheseextraclasseswillhelptheirchildrentostandbyandbecomemorecompetitivein第1页/总3页thefuture.Actually,itwasunwisetoforcechildrentodowhattheydon'tlike.Toomanytrainingclasseswillbeheavyburdenforchildren.Parentsshouldn'tpushtheirchildrentoohardly.第2页/总3页专题限时训练(四十四)(一)Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcerningabouttheirhealth,buthowtokeephealth?First,itisnecessarytotakeanyexerciseeveryday.Researchshowsthatgetplentyofexercisemakestheheartbeatfastandthelungsworkharder.Second,eatmorefruits,vegetableandlessmeat.Third,gettingridofbadhabitsassmokinganddrinkingisalso∧importantwaytokeephealthy.Smokingandalcoholdrinkinginjuresone'shealthagreatdeal,andthereforeshouldbegivenup.Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfit,they'llgreatimprovetheirhealth.(二)Nowadays,peopleinmanybigcitiesarecomplaining∧theheavytraffic.Ithasseriousinfluencedpeopledailylifeandeconomicdevelopment.Tosolvetheproblem,somepiecesofadviceisputforward.Somepeoplesuggestthatmorestreetsandroadsarebuilt.Bythisway,thetrafficdensitycanbereduced,thusspeedinguptheflowofbusesandcars.Somepeopleadviselimitingthenumberofbikesandcars.Thiscandecreasethetrafficflow.Butontheotherhand,thiswilleffecttheconsumptionandmakesbusesmorecrowded.Inmyopinion,thenumberofprivatecarsshouldbeputunderthe[KG2mm]control.Andatthesametime,busesshouldhavetheirownspecialroutes∧cannotbeusedbyothervehicles.(三)Weseniorschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains.Takesomeofmyclassmateforexample,theyoftenfeelupsetbecause∧theexpectationsfromparents,endlesshomeworkandthepressureofexams.Theseseriousaffecttheirphysicalandmentalwellbeing.Therefore,Ithinkabout[KG2mm]itquitenecessarytotakemeasurestorelievethepains.First,thatisagoodideatohaveheartto-hearttalkswithourparents,tellthemwewon'tdisappointthem.Meanwhile,it'sadvisabletosparesometimetotakesomeexercisebesideourdevotiontothestudiessothatwewillalwaysfeelrelaxingandenergetic.Aslongaswewerefullyprepared,wearesuretoachievegreatsuccessinmyacademicperformance.(四)Asweallknowit[KG1mm],manychildrenhavetospendtheirweekendsandholidaysattendingvarioustrainingcoursesthoughtheyareunwillingto.That'swhytheirparentsdon'twanthimtofallbehindatthestartingline.Instead,theyhopetheirchildrenareequippingwithasmanyskillsaspossible.Thereforetheywon'tlosefaceswhencomparingtheirchildrenwithothers'.Beside,theyaresuretheseextraclasseswillhelptheirchildrentostandbyandbecomemorecompetitiveinthefuture.Actually,itwasunwisetoforcechildrentodowhattheydon'tlike.Toomanytrainingclasseswillbe∧heavyburdenforchildren.Parentsshouldn'tpushtheirchildrentoohardly.第3页/总3页