专题检测卷(三十四)短文改错(建议用时:40分钟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。1(2013·吉林模拟)DearDad,Youareverybusyeverydaythatyouneverpayenoughattentiontoyourhealth.Iwasworriedaboutyourhealthallthetime.I’dliketogiveyousomeadvices.Ihearthatwalkingisthebestsport.Yourcompanyisn’tfarawayfromhome,isit?Whynottowalktotheoffice?You’dbettertakeexerciseatmostonceaweek.Youcanplayabasketballinthegym.Goingtoswimisanicechoice,too.Tryingnottostayuptoolately.Havingenoughsleepcanhelpyourbrainworkbetter.Ofcourse,thisisveryimportanttohavehealthyfood.Dad,pleasereceivemyadvice.Ireallywishyouhealthy!Yourlovingdaughter,Mary2(2013·大庆模拟)Onceamanaskedapaintertopaintingapictureforhim.Hetoldtheartisthedidn’twanttoanyshadowsinthepicture,justsunshine,buttheartistdidso.Whenthemansawthefinishedpicture,hewasdisappointing.Withoutshadows,everythinginthepicturelooksflatandunreal.Thepointofthestoryisthatweneedbothshadowsandsunshinetohaveacompletelypicture,justasweneedbothrainandsuntohavelivingworld.People,too,needsbothsadnessandhappiness.Weoftenlearnimportantlessonduringsadtimes.Sowhenwefeelsad,weshouldtrytostopandthinkaboutthatwemightlearnfromtheexperience.3(2013·玉溪模拟)Asstudents,wehaveclassesforearlymorningtilllateafternoon.Therefore,takeaten-minutebreakbetweenclassisdefinitelyimportant,evennecessary.Otherwisewemayfeelbothphysicallyormentallytired.Duringtheten-minutebreakwedidsomethingtogetridoftiredness.Whatweneedistohaverealrest,insteadofgettingeventired.Sodon’tdoanythingthatwillmakeyoutooexcited.Myten-minutebreakisalwayspleased.Iusuallytakesomeexercise.SometimeIhaveafreechatwithmyclassmates.Whenthenewclassbegins,Ifeelfreshlyagain.4(2013·天水模拟)It’sreportedthatmanypeoplediedoftrafficaccidentseachyear.Roadsafetyhasarousedthewidelyattentionofthepublic.Manyruleshavemadetoreducethetrafficcrashes,especiallyfortheonesinvolvedinthepedestrians.Inmyopinion,weshouldmakeroadsafetyseriouslyinourdailylife.Whileusedtheroad,wemustwalkonthepavementandlearntoprotectus.Besides,cardriversshouldobeythetrafficrules,thatisbothgoodforthemselvesandothers.Intheword,obeyingthetrafficrulesarewhatallofusshouldpayattentiontoparticularly.Afterall,lifeisnotasmallmatter.答案解析1.答案：DearDad,Youareverybusyeverydaythatyouneverpayenoughattentiontoyourhealth.soIwasworriedaboutyourhealthallthetime.I’dliketogiveyousomeadvices.Ihearamadvicethatwalkingisthebestsport.Yourcompanyisn’tfarawayfromhome,isit?Whynottowalktotheoffice?You’dbettertakeexerciseatmostonceaweek.Youcanplayaleastbasketballinthegym.Goingtoswimisanicechoice,too.TryingnottostayuptooTrylately.Havingenoughsleepcanhelpyourbrainworkbetter.Ofcourse,thisisverylateitimportanttohavehealthyfood.Dad,pleasereceivemyadvice.Ireallywishyouhealthy!acceptYourlovingdaughter,Mary1.【解析】将第一句中的very改为so。so...that引导结果状语从句。2.【解析】将第二句中的was改为am。此处是一般现在时。3.【解析】将第三句中的advices改为advice。advice不可数名词。4.【解析】将第六句中的第一个to去掉。whynot+动词原形，表示建议。5.【解析】将第七句中的most改为least。at...
