湖北省黄冈市2014高考英语作文训练题连载（9）及参考范文【广东省茂名市二模】基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)假设你的同学因自己的肥胖而苦恼，请根据以下建议写一篇英语短文。[写作内容]Don’tsDos不要吃过多油腻的食物；睡觉前不要吃零食。否则可能增加体重或消化不良(indigestion)。要保持均衡饮食；每天需要至少一个小时的运动，比如可以选择步行上学，这样既有利于减肥，又可以保护环境。做到持之以恒，只有这样才会在不久的将来拥有苗条的身材。[写作要求]1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2.首句已经给出，不计入总句数。[评分标准]句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。Dearclassmate,I’velearnedthatyouaretryingtoloseweightandIamgladtogiveyousomesuggestions.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)I’velearnedthatyouaretryingtoloseweightandIamgladtogiveyousomesuggestions.On(the)onehand,youshouldn'teattoomuchfattyfoodoreatsnacksbeforeyousleep.Otherwise,youmaygainweightorsufferfromindigestion.Ontheotherhand,youshouldkeepabalanceddiet.Meanwhile,doingexerciseforatleastonehourperdayisneeded,likewalkingtoschool,whichisnotonlybeneficialforyourweightloss,butalsohelpsprotecttheenvironment.Aboveall,youshouldbepersistent,becauseonlyinthiswaycanyoubecomesliminthenearfuture.【陕西省西安市长安一中2014第二次模拟】书面表达（满分30分）假定你是中学生李华。在国外中学生贴吧上看到一位名叫Slowstudent的中学生的帖子，你看到如下内容。请你根据帖子内容、写作要点和要求跟帖。写作要点：1.表明自己的看法；2.陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；3.提出至少两条建议。要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4.书写需清晰、工整。Parents’meetingpanicsslowstudentSlowstudentAparents’meetingisalwaysmeaningacomplaintsmeetingtoaslowstudent.Myparentswillscoldmewhenevertheycomebackfromit.Nowthemid-termexamisoverandanotherterribleparenets’meetingisaroundthecorner.WhatshallIdo?Help!CommentsSigninorregistertocommentandratecomments.Allpostsarepre-moderatedandmustobeythehouserules.Parents’meetingpanicsslowstudentSlowstudentAparents’meetingisalwaysmeaningacomplaintsmeetingtoaslowstudent.Myparentswillscoldmewhenevertheycomebackfromit.Nowthemid-termexamisoverandanotherterribleparenets’meetingisaroundthecorner.WhatshallIdo?Help!CommentsSigninorregistertocommentandratecomments.Allpostsarepre-moderatedandmustobeythehouserules.Parents’meetingpanicsslowstudentSlowstudentAparents’meetingisalwaysmeaningacomplaintsmeetingtoaslowstudent.Myparentswillscoldmewhenevertheycomebackfromit.Nowthemid-termexamisoverandanotherterribleparenets’meetingisaroundthecorner.WhatshallIdo?Help!CommentsSigninorregistertocommentandratecomments.Allpostsarepre-moderatedandmustobeythehouserules.DearSlowstudent,Thisisreallyatoughnuttocrack.Inmyopinion,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Parents’meetingpanicsslowstudentSlowstudentAparents’meetingisalwaysmeaningacomplaintsmeetingtoaslowstuden...
