Proofreading1:Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a
andendsat3:30p
Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon
Wedidn’tneedtodosomanyhomework
Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities
Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday
Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden
Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings
Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic
Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully
Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends
Proofreading2DearJeremyandAlice,Althoughwe’vebeendelightingtohaveyouasneighbors,we’rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous
Inaword,yourdog-Cleo
We’vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo’searlymorningbarking
Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe’soutside
Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbing