BeautifyyourComposition词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）1.覆盖了所有的要点2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？•书面表达在评阅时遵循•语言第一位（语言高级）•内容第二位（要点齐全）•结构第三位（文章分段）•一、高级词汇和语法；•二、修辞手法；•三、有效的连词；•四、名人名言或谚语。技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式词汇使用四原则•1、词组优先原则•2、地道原则。•3、避免重复原则•4、后、高、长原则——后学到、较高级、较长词汇。1.It’sveryhelpful.2.Youreffortswillbeveryimportant.3.SuddenlyIhadagoodidea.4.moreandmorepeopleItbenefitsalot./Itisofgreathelp.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇Youreffortswillmakeagreatdifference.SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.anincreasingnumberofpeople1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.4.Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.一、怎样使用较高级的词汇Weallthinkhighlyofhim.Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere.6.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.7.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.9.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.10.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.ShewenttoAustriaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.Atthenewsofhisdeath,shewentpalewithsorrow.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty–sixclassrooms.You’llhavenotroublefindingmyhouse.1.感叹句HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter!Whatakindboyheis!2.强调句Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.二、使用丰富的句式：利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思,能增加文章的文采。3、倒装句Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Therecomesthepolicecar.Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman.4、省略句Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Cometomeifnecessary.5、with短语Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.6、定语从句Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary.7、各种名词性从句That’swhatIshoulddo.Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent.8、各种状语从句Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.Themomentwereachedthefarm,wegotdowntoharvesting.Solongasweworkharderatourlessons,we’llcatchupsoonerorlater.DocallmebeforehandsothatIcanmeetyouattheairport.Theyhadtowaitbecausetherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavily.•Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.•Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant．•Sheisaclevergirl．Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.Howimportantitistopreventthepollution!whataclevergirlsheis!•Wecanachievesuccessinthisway.•Itissoeasythatevenachildcandoit.•Smokingdidgreatharmtohishealth.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccess..ItwassmokingthatdidgreatharmtohishealthSoeasyisitthatevenachil...
