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2开头段的写法谈现象，不给观点hook+phenomenon（relatedtothetopic）方法：hook=background1）写“重要性，严重性，普遍性”－－－升级版：加时间，范围，人群，条件句型1：…,especiallywhen…/mainlybecause…句型2时间/条件+三性+范围/人群时间：nowadays,recently,presently,inthepast,incurrentdays,overthepastfewdecades,inthecontemporarytime,bytheendof20thcentury,tilltheendoflastcentury.范围：大范围：instudents’life,inpeople’slives,inourneighborhood,inourmodernlife,insuchahighly-commercializedsociety/community.(computerized,cyberized,urbanized,globalized)小范围：tosocialcohesion,tosocialstability,tosocialharmony,tosocialsustainabledevelopment;tochildren’sphysicalandmentalwell-being;tocultivatingvirtues…社会，生活，社区，片区，圈子circle对象：人群：amonguniversitystudents,amongtheyouth,amongmodernpeople,amongdifferentgenerations，post-eighties教育：educator,educationalist社会：scholar,expert,specialist,sociologist,psychologist,observer经济：economist,researcher环境：environmentalist,volunteer科技：technician,inventor,scientistamongtheyoungergeneration,inparticular/especiallythepost-nineties.People是人的集合概念，没有peoples的形式，也不可以说apeople.条件：随着，伴随着社会：economic,cultural,environment,education,scienceandtechnologicalwiththefastprogressintechnology(technologicalinnovation),withtheimprovementofstandardsofliving,withthespeedypaceofmodernlife,withtheincreasingpopulationandsettlement,Withtheimprovementofoverall/generalintellectuallevel,举例：近日，随着技术创新的快速发展，电子商务已经变成了在高度商业化的社会里一个不可被忽视的商业类型。Recently,withtheaccelerationoftechnologicalinnovation,electroniccommercehasbecomeincreasinglyprevalentinahighly-commercializedsociety.一直以来，教育在人们的生活中都起着至关重要的作用。AlwaysThroughtheriverofhumanhistory,Invariably,Unchangedly,大范围：Invariably,educationhasbeenplayinganintegralpartinpeople’slife.小范围：Invariably,educationhasbeenwidelyrecognizedasoneofthemostimportantfactosthatcontributetoaperson’ssuccessandhappiness.Invariably,educationservesasamostessentialandeffectivemeansforpeopletoimproveskillsandexpandknowledge.随着社会整体文化水平的提高，教育越来越在人们的生活中起着重要的作用。Withtheimprovementoftheoverall/generalintellectuallevelinthesociety,条件/时间＋关键词定性分析＋人群/范围各种性：重要性：(系表)...isfairlyessential/critical/significant/fatal/indispensable...fairly:considerably,extraordinarily,exceedingly（主谓/主语+不及物动词）...mattersmost/makesahuge/great/littledifferencewhencomparedwithotherstuff/business/factors.（主谓宾/主语+及物动词+宾语）...playsaleading/pressingrole/part....(必要性)：(系表)...isfairlynecessary/rudimentary雏形的/fundamental/imperative...普遍性：(系表)...isfairlyfamiliar/common/prevailing/prevalent....（主谓）...hasbeenpenetratingintoallwalksoflife.（主谓）...existseverywhere.严重性：...isfairlysevere,serious,grave已经变得…:hasbeenincreasinglypopularhasbecome…hasturnedtobe…sample:Presently,withtheimprovementofstandardsofliving,televisionandmovieplayanincreasinglyleadingroleinpeople’srecreational/leisurelylives.第二句话：However/Also,itisaninteresting/intriguingphenomenonthatpeopleingrowingnumbersarevoicingtheiropinionson….(提纲内容的第一部分）..名词形式的宾语／动名词替换句型However/meanwhile,itisinterestingtonotethatagrowingnumberofpeopleareexpressingtheirconcernsabout…People:so...