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四级作文评分标准及常见错误解析根据自己近几年对英语四级的研究以及自己的切身经历，我讲英语作文中常见的错误给同学们做了一个简单的小结，希望同学们看后能有所启发评分标准2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。(注:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。)1.主语缺失1)Inourcountryfeelsveryfree.Peoplefeelfreeinourcountry.2)Inmyhometownaren’tverybusy.Peopleinmyhometownareverybusy.2.非名词主语1)Richdoesn’tensureahappylife.Beingrichdoesn’tmeanahappylife./Wealthdoesn’tensureahappylife.2)Keeptwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.Keepingtwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.3.主谓错位1)Readingbookscanacquireknowledge.Peoplecanacquireknowledgefrombooks.2)Nowpeople’slivescan’tleaveTV.Nowpeoplecan’tdowithoutTV.二、谓语错误1.多重谓语1)Inourmodernsociety,therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated.Inourmodernsociety,manyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated./Alargenumberofpeoplehavefallenvictimtovarioustricks.2)Povertymakesmanypeoplecan’tstudyabroad.Povertymakesmanypeopleunabletostudyabroad./Povertymakesitimpossibleformanypeopletostudyabroad./Povertypreventsmanypeoplefromstudyingabroad./Manypeoplecan’tstudyabroadbecauseofpoverty.2.非动词谓语1)Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersagainstit.Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersareagainstit.2)Itissaidthattheplaceworthstouring.Itissaidthattheplaceisworthtouring.3.主谓不一致1)IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachmeCollegeEnglish.IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachesmeCollegeEnglish.2)Iuseadiskbecauseitholdplentyofdata.Iuseadiskbecauseitholdsplentyofdata..4.误用词组1)Theyinsistonpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.Theyinsistthatpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.2)Iamafraidofthatit’sgoingtorain.Iamafraidthatit’sgoingtorain.三、冠词错误1)Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.Inmyopinion,thefutureofthebicycleisverypromising.2)Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlythegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadones.Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlygoodbookstoreadandnevertouchbadones.四、代词错误1.偷梁换柱1)Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,youshouldnotplagiarize.Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,heshouldnotplagiarize.2)Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveusandtheywillleaveusalong./Ifyoucheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.2.指代不明1)Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,whichnobodybelieved.Hegaveareason,whichnobodybelieved,fornotattendingthemeeting./Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,areasonwhichnobodybelieved.2)Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdentheyhavetobear.Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdenstudentshavetobear.五、形容词、副词错误1)Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferently.Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferent.2)Surprisingenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.Surprisinglyenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.六、分词误用1)Comparingwithothercount...