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四级作文评分标准2分：条理不清，思路混乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分：基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性性差，有较多严重的语言错误。8分：基本切题，有些地方思想不够清楚文字勉强连贯，句型结构形式单一语言错误较多，其中一些是严重的错误。11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，运用丰富的句型结构（从句，倒装句，虚拟语气，分词，非谓语动词）但有少量语言错误。14分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误，仅个别小错（仅仅由于笔误而造成的不超过1-2处错误）。注意：不够120词，每10词扣1分作文题目：LimitingTheUseofDisposablePlasticBags1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用2.造成的问题3.限制使用的意义LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBagsWiththedevelopmentoftechnology,manynewinventorscameout,anddisposalplasticbagisoneofthemostpopular.Meanwhile,itbringaboutalotofproblems.First,itishardtobedisposed,itpollutetheriver,theseaandthesoil.Besides,somepeoplemaythrowaplasticbagwithsomefoodinit,thenitmaybeeatenbysomeanimals.Ofcourseitmaydoharmtotheanimals,evenmakethemdead.Weshouldlimittheuseofdisposalplasticbags.First,wecanreplacethedisposalplasticbagswithbasketsandclothbags.Second,wecanaskpeopletobuythedisposalplasticbagiftheywanttouseit.Thenwewillmakeourlifebetter.本文基本切题，大致传达了作者想要表达的意思，但每段都存在许多小问题。第一段只是表述了一次性塑料袋是一种科技产物，但没有明确表达出使用普遍的情况，并且前两段都存在时态使用错误的问题。第二段条理清楚，但论点和论据缺乏逻辑关系词(forthefirst/secondplace,finally/therefore…)，句子衔接不够自然。第三段没有按照提纲要求阐述限制塑料袋的意义。LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBagsItisatruthuniversallyacknowledgedthatdisposableplasticbagshavemadeourlifeconvenient.However,theappearanceoftheplasticbagsalsoraisesanissue:Shouldwelookforconvenienceatthecostofenvironmentandhealth?Convenientastheybe,thedisposableplasticbagsalsocausedmanyproblems.Firstofall,desertedplasticbagscanbringabout“whitepollution”.Inaddition,burnedplasticbagsmayreleasepoisonousgasesandmaterialsthatcanleadtovariousdiseases.Finally,plasticbagsarehardtodecompose（分解）.Ourgovernmentadvocateslimitingtheuseofdisposableplasticbags.Iamentirelyinfavorofit.Ibelieve,inthenearfuture,theplasticbagswillbeusedlessoftenandtheenvironmentweliveincanbemorepleasantandcomfortable.What’smore,wewillenjoymorehealthylives.Inaword,itishightimeforustotakeeffectiveactionstomakeamorebeautifulandharmoniousworld.本文内容切题，框架完整，能够围绕提纲进行写作，段落分明，思想表达基本清楚，并且巧妙地运用了多种过渡性的词语。不足之处在于：文章第三段句型过于单一，草草收尾。14分范例：Tosumup,itismeaningfultolimittheuseofdisposableplasticbags.Itissignificant(obvious)thatourgovernmenthaslimitedtheuseofdisposableplasticbagsofficially(formally),andpeoplewillbechargedfor(payfor)theuseofsuchbags,whichnotonlyenhances(raise)people’sawarenessonenvironmentalprotectionbutalsocutsdown(reduces)thecostoftherunningofsupermarkets.Everyoneinthissocietyshouldcontribute(do)someefforttoprotectourearthandlivingenvironmenttomakeabetterlife.