四级作文评分标准2分:条理不清,思路混乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。5分:基本切题,表达思想不清楚,连贯性性差,有较多严重的语言错误。8分:基本切题,有些地方思想不够清楚文字勉强连贯,句型结构形式单一语言错误较多,其中一些是严重的错误。11分:切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,运用丰富的句型结构(从句,倒装句,虚拟语气,分词,非谓语动词)但有少量语言错误。14分:切题,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本无语言错误,仅个别小错(仅仅由于笔误而造成的不超过1-2处错误)。注意:不够120词,每10词扣1分作文题目:LimitingTheUseofDisposablePlasticBags1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用2.造成的问题3.限制使用的意义LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBagsWiththedevelopmentoftechnology,manynewinventorscameout,anddisposalplasticbagisoneofthemostpopular.Meanwhile,itbringaboutalotofproblems.First,itishardtobedisposed,itpollutetheriver,theseaandthesoil.Besides,somepeoplemaythrowaplasticbagwithsomefoodinit,thenitmaybeeatenbysomeanimals.Ofcourseitmaydoharmtotheanimals,evenmakethemdead.Weshouldlimittheuseofdisposalplasticbags.First,wecanreplacethedisposalplasticbagswithbasketsandclothbags.Second,wecanaskpeopletobuythedisposalplasticbagiftheywanttouseit.Thenwewillmakeourlifebetter.本文基本切题,大致传达了作者想要表达的意思,但每段都存在许多小问题。第一段只是表述了一次性塑料袋是一种科技产物,但没有明确表达出使用普遍的情况,并且前两段都存在时态使用错误的问题。第二段条理清楚,但论点和论据缺乏逻辑关系词(forthefirst/secondplace,finally/therefore…),句子衔接不够自然。第三段没有按照提纲要求阐述限制塑料袋的意义。LimitingtheUseofDisposablePlasticBagsItisatruthuniversallyacknowledgedthatdisposableplasticbagshavemadeourlifeconvenient.However,theappearanceoftheplasticbagsalsoraisesanissue:Shouldwelookforconvenienceatthecostofenvironmentandhealth?Convenientastheybe,thedisposableplasticbagsalsocausedmanyproblems.Firstofall,desertedplasticbagscanbringabout“whitepollution”.Inaddition,burnedplasticbagsmayreleasepoisonousgasesandmaterialsthatcanleadtovariousdiseases.Finally,plasticbagsarehardtodecompose(分解).Ourgovernmentadvocateslimitingtheuseofdisposableplasticbags.Iamentirelyinfavorofit.Ibelieve,inthenearfuture,theplasticbagswillbeusedlessoftenandtheenvironmentweliveincanbemorepleasantandcomfortable.What’smore,wewillenjoymorehealthylives.Inaword,itishightimeforustotakeeffectiveactionstomakeamorebeautifulandharmoniousworld.本文内容切题,框架完整,能够围绕提纲进行写作,段落分明,思想表达基本清楚,并且巧妙地运用了多种过渡性的词语。不足之处在于:文章第三段句型过于单一,草草收尾。14分范例:Tosumup,itismeaningfultolimittheuseofdisposableplasticbags.Itissignificant(obvious)thatourgovernmenthaslimitedtheuseofdisposableplasticbagsofficially(formally),andpeoplewillbechargedfor(payfor)theuseofsuchbags,whichnotonlyenhances(raise)people’sawarenessonenvironmentalprotectionbutalsocutsdown(reduces)thecostoftherunningofsupermarkets.Everyoneinthissocietyshouldcontribute(do)someefforttoprotectourearthandlivingenvironmenttomakeabetterlife.