、Conclusion:结论段、建议措施段三至四句(50-55词):1+2+1总→分→总1.Concludingsentence:结论句,1句引出重复论点(总结归纳中心句)2.Suggestions:2句两点建议或两句评论3.包装结尾,展望未来/趋势,1句1.Concludingsentence:结论句(1句2.1)总之,我们很有必要从这些发人深省的图画中获得积极的含义。/采取有效措施扭转这些图画中所反映的负面趋势。3.Accordingly,itisimperative/vitalforusto(1)derivepositiveimplicationsfromthesethought-provokingdrawing./4.(2)totakeeffectiveandefficientmeasurestoreversethedisturbingtrendillustratedinthepictures.2)2006:因此,偶像崇拜这一发人深省的社会现象,是能够对年轻人成长产生深远影响的一柄双刃剑。Hence/Therefore,idolworship,thethought-provokingsocialphenomenon,isadouble-edgedswordwhichcanexertprofoundinfluenceonthegrowthofyoungpeoplesuggestions两点建议或两句评论(2经常提到的几个方面:A.authorities(专家参与);B.education(增强意识);C.public;D.media(社会和媒体关注)E.self-effortTobeginwith,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetoseverelypunishthosewhoplagiarizeothers’works.(法律)Inaddition,weshouldenlighten/educatetheawarenessoftheyoungthatacademichonestyisextremelyvitaltous.(教育2)(2008)Itis,therefore,necessarythateffectivestepsbemadetoadvocatespiritofsupportingeachother.Tobeginwith,thegovernmentshouldmakelawstoencouragepeopletounite.Inaddition,peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessofcaringeachotherespeciallywhentheyareintrouble..包装结尾,展望未来(1)倒装句2)强调句3)虚拟语气(1)2002:只有这样我们才能积极发展民族文化,并使我们的世界丰富多元、多姿多彩、充满活力。Onlyinthiswaycanwepromoteculturaldevelopmentpositivelyandmakeourworlddimensional,colorfulandvigorous(2)2003:只有在逆境中经历更多的挑战和磨练,他们才能培养出坚强的个性和优秀的能力OnlybyundergoingmorechallengesandtoilsinadversitycanyoungpeoplecultivatestrongpersonalityandabilityOnlywhenoureyeshavebeenwashedbytearscanwehaveabroaderfieldofvision.强调句总而言之,只有长期学习才有助于你掌握大量词汇inconclusion,itispersistentworkthatisconduciveto(对。。。有利)yourgraspingaconsiderablevocabulary。虚拟语气Itishightimethatweplacedgreatemphasisonthisphenomenon.008——积极寓义Accordingly,itisimperativeforustotakesomemeasurestoenhancethesenseofteamworkinoursociety.Weshouldbearinmindthatteamworkisofgreatsignificancetobothoursocietyandourselves.Everyoneshouldhavetheabilityofteamwork.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccessandonlyinthiswaycanoursocietybecomemoreharmonioustolivein.(05年)(中心句)Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.(两个建议)Tobeginwith,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetoseverelypunishthosewhoshuntheresponsibilitiesofcaringtheirparents.Inaddition,wehavetocultivatetheawarenessoftheyoungthatrespectingtheoldhasalwaysbeenthetraditionalvirtueofChineseculture.(结论句)Onlyinthiswaycanwecurbthecurrentevilphenomenonrevealedinthepicture.08年)(结论中心句)Onthebasisoftheanalysisabove,wemaydrawaconclusionthatcooperationandteamworkreallycountinthiscompetitivesociety.(两个建议)Hence,weshouldassociateourselvesharmoniouslywithourcompanionsineveryattempttowardsourgoals.Inaddition,itisindispensabletotrainourkidsfrequentlytointeractsmoothlywithothersinateam.(结论句)Astheproverbgoes,unityisstrength.1.总共写十七个句子.第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词...