1高考英语作文范文假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)
给外教MrJenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)注意:1
词数100左右;2
可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯
【答案】DearMsJenkins,IamLiHua,IamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthecomingsummervacationandIalsowantyoutodomeafavor
Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany
Ihavealreadyfinishedmyjobapplicationandpersonalresume
ButthisisthefirsttimethatIhavewrittenanapplicationandthepersonalsresume,soIdon’tevenknowiftherearesomethingtopayattentionto
So,I’mwritingyoutheletter,hopingyoucangivemesomehelp
Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucanhelpme
Lookingforwardtoyourreply
AndI’dbereallythankful
Yours,LiHua【亮点】本文是一篇较为优秀的范文
格式正确,要点全面,语言通顺流畅,很好地完成了写作任务
在本文中开头提出写信的目的,然后具体讲述自己的困难,再提出请求,最后表达自己的感激之情
所以在内容上逻辑性较强
此外,作者还使用了不定式短语Inordertogetsomepracticalexper