1高考英语作文范文假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MrJenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。【答案】DearMsJenkins,IamLiHua,IamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthecomingsummervacationandIalsowantyoutodomeafavor.Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.Ihavealreadyfinishedmyjobapplicationandpersonalresume.ButthisisthefirsttimethatIhavewrittenanapplicationandthepersonalsresume,soIdon’tevenknowiftherearesomethingtopayattentionto.So,I’mwritingyoutheletter,hopingyoucangivemesomehelp.Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucanhelpme.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.AndI’dbereallythankful.Yours,LiHua【亮点】本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,、现在分词短语hopingyoucangivemesomehelp、宾语从句iftherearesomethingtopayattentionto等。经典句式thisisthefirsttimethatIhavewrittenanapplicationandthepersonalsresume也是文章的亮点所在。2考高作文范文假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1.栏目介绍。2.稿件内容；3.稿件长度：约400词汇4.交稿日期：6月28日前天注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；3.开头语已为你写好。【参考答案】DearPeter,I'dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.The“ForeignCultures”sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasit’sinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune28?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua不够丰富【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.运用了过去分词作后置定语，AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如bepopularamong,solongas,lookforwardto,hearfrom等。3高考作文假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容）注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3．参考词汇：住宿-accommodationDearSir/Madam,IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.I’veseenyourad,andI’dliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourse.Firstwhenwillthecoursestartandhowmanyclasshoursarethereperweek?Besides,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.I’dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincludedWouldtherebehostfamilyoruniversitydormitory?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua4高考英语作文假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。第二节：OnePossibleVersionDearPeter,Howareyoudoing?I’mwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtoyourcityforaconference,andI’veaskedhimtobringyoutheChinesepaintingyou’veaskedforbefore.Also,I’dlikeyoutodomeafavor.WouldyoupleasemeetmyuncleattheairportandtakehimtohishotelsincethisishisfirstvisittotheU.S.?Thankyouinadvance!HisflightnumberisCA985,anditwillarriveat11:30am,August6.Myuncleistallandheiswearingglasses.Andhewillbeinabluejacket.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua
