Unit7Wherewouldyouliketovisit【佳篇欣赏】ALastsummerholiday,IwenttoHainanwithmyfamilybyair.Theweatherwaswonderful!Itwasn’thotatall.TheskywasbluemorethanIcoulddescribe,theseawasblueandbrightmorethanIcouldbelieve.Walkingbytheseaisjustlikebeinginanoilpainting.WesailedtoanislandcalledXidao.Iswamthere.Swimmingintheseaisquitedifferentfromthatinaswimmingpool,becausetheseaissodeepthatIcandiveforalongtime.Wealsoenjoyedthefoodthere.Wehadaniceseafooddish.Itwasreallytasty.Ireallylikethatplace.Ihopetogothereagainsomeday.BBeijingisthecapitalofChinawithalonghistory.Therearelotsofplacesofinterest,suchastheGreatWall,thePalaceMuseum,theSummerPalaceandsoon.SinceitliesinthenorthofChina,thewinterhereislongandcoldanditsnowssometimes.AutumnisthebestseasoninBeijing,foritisneithertoocoldnortoohot.Asfortraditionalfood,oneofthemostfamousisBeijingRoastDuck.Inaddition,the2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijing,whichbringsabetterchancetoknowaboutChinaandBeijing.So,welcometoBeijingandenjoyeverythinghere.CManypeopleliketogotoplaceswheretherearemountainsandrivers.Iwouldliketovisitsomewhereunusual.IsurfedtheInternetandfoundthatHamiisaplaceworthvisiting.HamiisintheeastofXinjiang.ItisfamousforHamimelon.Theweatherthereisunusual.Itisdryalltheyearround.Itisveryhotinsummerandhardlyrains.Inwinter,itisverycold,andsometimesitsnowsheavily.Thescenerythereisquiteunusual.Inthesouthofthecity,itismainlygobidesert.HamiCityisanoasisinthedesert.Inthenorthofcity，itismainlygrassland.Itisjustliketwoworlds.Ihopetogotheresomeday.It’sreallyanattractiveplace.【原创习作点评】寒假即将来临，你们家决定外出旅游，你认为应该去哪儿呢写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈你的想法，并说明为什么。分析：这是一篇发挥余地较大的作文，可以根据实际情况来写自己想要去的一个地方。从题目要求来看，首先要说明自己想去的地方。也可以先谈自己想去什么类型的地方，再选择一个具体的城市。其次，要讲原因，就是为什么想去这个地方。根据自己所了解的，简单介绍所要去的地方，要凸出特征，引起人们的兴趣,把重点放在可以做的事情上。习作1：Winterholidayiscoming.I’dliketo①gotosomewherewarm,becauseitistoocoldhere.IthinkwecangotoSanya.Sanyaiswarminwinter.It’sthebesttimetogothere.TheTemperatureisbetween23℃and29℃.Wecanenjoythesunshine②atthebeach.Inthemorning，wecanwalkalongtheseasidebecausetheairisfresh.Ifitiswarmenoughwecanevenswiminthesea.Let’sgotoSanya.教师点评这是一篇中等的学生习作。得分点（1）内容完整，符合作文要求（2）语言流畅，层次清晰。失分点①此处应为gosomewhere,somewhere是副词，副词前不使用介词。②此处介词搭配错误，应该是onthebeach。习作2：Winterholidayiscoming.Ithinkweshouldgosomewheretoenjoytheholiday.Winterisabeautifulseason.IthinkweshouldgotoHarbin.Therewecanenjoytheworldofsnow.Wehavemanythingstodothere.WecangototheSunIslandtoseetheicesculpture.It’smore教师点评这是一片较好的学生习作。得分点（1）能按照题目要求写作，作文内容完整。（2）通过举例，说明了去哈尔滨旅游的特色，比较有说服力。beautifulatnight.Ithinkitmustbeinteresting.WecanalsogoskatingontheSonghuajiangRiver.Itmustbemoreexciting.Iwanttomakeabigsnowmanandhaveasnowballfightwithmyparents.Iamlookingforwardtogoingthere.（3）用词较丰富，无语言错误。【拓展练笔】1、在假期生活中，几乎每个人都去过自己喜欢的地方，即使你没有如愿以偿，也会对你想去的地方有很深的了解。现在请你介绍一下你最想游览的地方。提示：1.想要游览的城市；2.那个城市的自然风光；3.值得游览的地方。Onepossibleversion:I’dliketovisitplaceswherethesceneryisreal...
