Step1.ListeningforinformationTimeWeatherTemperaturesInthemorningDrywithalightmist(薄雾)(16)_____°CLaterintheafternoon(17)(18)Cloudyandaheavyrain4—5°C(19)ThebeltoflowpressuremovingawayThewholedaytomorrow(20)11一14°C8-10AfewshowersBymidnightEarlytomorrowmorningBrightandwarmI.1990—2003年高考书面表达题样回顾1.从内容和体裁上分体裁内容历年书面表达应用文书信(便条)对话通知(口头书面)请柬记叙文说明文介绍人物事件日记故事或经历场景事物’95,’99,’01,’02,’03’94’91,’962000’92,’98’93,’97,’042.从提示形式上分提示形式文字中文英文历年书面表达表格’90,’91,’94’96,’2001,’2002’92,’93,’95,’97,’98,’99,’2000图画结论:从上面两表看出:高考书面表达最常见的是应用文和记叙文,所写内容都与日常生活密切相关。图文并茂’2003,’2004书面表达(满分25分)某中学生英语报社正开展一场题为“Youngteachersorelderlyteachers,whichdoyouprefer?”请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文,向该报社投稿。老年教师青年教师·教学耐心.讲解细致.经验丰富·精力充沛.教学活泼.勇于创新你的观点?注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好,不计入总数;2.短文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确,结构合理,紧凑连贯。Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.学生作品1:Comparewithyoungteachers,Ipreferelderlyteachers.Therearesomereasonsbelow.Foronething,mostofelderlyteachersarepatientinteaching.Theynotonlysparenoefforttoteachthestudents,butalsogiveclassescarefully.Theywilldoalltheycantomakethestudentsunderstandtheteachingcontent.Whatgoodteachers!Foranotherthing,elderlyteachersarefullofteachingexperience.Thisisalsothemostimportant,especiallyforusseniorstudents.Thisisonlymyopinion.Ithinkyoungteachersarealsogood.点评:亮点:1、观点鲜明,词汇句型的运用比较灵活2、过渡词及连词的使用使文章结构紧凑连贯、条理清楚。2、审题不全面,忽略了对青年教师这部分信息的处理。这一点是比较大的失误。∧1)2)3)1)Compared2)more3)trytomaketheclasseslivelyandinteresting不足之处:1、个别地方的表达需要改进。学生作品2:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Somestudentswholiketheelderlyteachersmorethantheyoungonesthinkthattheelderlyonesaremorepatientinteaching,morecarefulinexplainingandalsohavealotofexperience.However,theothershaveadifferentopinion.Theythinktheteacherswhoareyoungarefullofenergy.Besides,theirteachingislivelyandtheydaretobringinthenewideas.Well,inmyopinion,Ilikeboththeelderlyteachersandtheyoungonesbecausefromthemwebothcanlearnalot.点评:亮点:1、段落清楚,要点齐全,句式表达比较灵活,能适当运用复句。2、过渡词运用也比较熟练。需要改进的地方:1)2)3)\4)1)prefertheelderlyteacherstotheyoungones2)withexplanations3)the去掉4)Theyoungteachers学生作品3:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Somestudentsbelieveelderlyteachersarefairlypatient.Theycanexplainsomethingdifficultsmoothlytotheclass.They’vealsogotmuchexperiencewhichtheyoungteachersarelackof.However,otherstudentsprefertheyoungteacherstotheelderly.Theythinkyoungteachersarefullofenergyandtheydaretobreakawayfromtheoldmethodsofteaching,developingsomeeffectiveones.Besides,theyoungteacherscanbringtheirinterestingnewthoughtstothestudentsandmaketheclasseslively.Inmyopinion,theyoungteachersmaybethebetter,notjustforthereasonsmentionedabove,buttheonethatyoungteacherscangetclosetotheclassandholdgoodcommunicationamongtheclass.Ofcourse,ifateachercancontaintheadvantagesoftheelderlyandtheyoungteachers,heorshewillbethemostpopular.combine(maybemucheasiertogetalongwithandcommunicatewith)Onepossibleversion:Opinionsaredivide...