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高一写作指导无论从词法还是句法上讲，英语中动词是最关键的。而在高考英语书面表达评分中，动词错误往往又是扣分的重点。所以同学们在写作时要特别注意动词的正确使用。一般来说，中学生在写作中出现的动词错误主要有以下几个方面：一、时态误用二、语态错误三、词形错误四、词性错误五、词义错误六、句式错误一、时态误用一般来说，根据写作要求能够非常明确地判断出应该主要用什么时态，像写日记、看图书面表达，讲述发生的一件事，其主要时态就是一般过去时。出现时态错误的主要原因是：（1）对各种时态的基本概念不清楚（2）时间立足点把握不准（3）母语干扰由于汉语动词没有时态变化，许多同学缺乏时态概念（4）考场时间不够Heisworkinginthiscompanyeversincehewasgraduatedfromcollege.Theteacherexplainedthatlighttrvaeledfasterthansound.××hasbeenworkingtravels二、语态错误•Marywasdressinginwhite.•Thestorywashappenedlonglongago.•Wewatchedthetraintillitwasdisappeared.dressed英语中seat，dress，devote等动词常用被动语态belongto,breakout,disappear,happen,occur,takeplace,等词无被动语态三、词形错误•动词有过去式、过去分词、现在分词、单数第三人称形式。•Inshort,thingshavebegantoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload.•Iwasstudiinginmyroomwhenthetelephonerang.•Thedriverdrivedsofastthatthecarknockedintoatruck.•Theballoonburstedsuddenly.begunstudyingdroveburst四、词性错误1.及物动词与不及物动词混用•Theteacherenteredintotheclassroom.•WeallagreedMary’sidea.•Thesuggestionwascomeupatthemeeting.•Myhometownhastakenplacegreatchangesinthepasttwentyyears.withcameGreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninthepasttwentyyears.易用错的这类不及物动词有happen,takeplace,occur,breakout,runout,comeup,cometrue,goout,belongto,remain,disappear等及物动词有marry,enter,serve,reach等2.实意动词和系动词的误用•Themusicsoundswell.•Thisrecordissoldgood.good英语中look,sound,taste,smell,feel等表示感觉的连系动词后接形容词作表语sellswell英语中有些说明主语自身特性的动词常用主动语态表被动含义，如sell,wash,write等Thiscloth____________.(好洗）Thispen______________.(书写流利)Thedoor_____________.(好关)washeseasilywritessmoothlycloseswell3.动词形容词介词的混用•OurPEteacherisill.Whowillinsteadofhim?•Theyallagainstyourplan.•IfavouriteEnglish.insteadof为介词，应改为taketheplaceof,或者说Whowilltakehisclassinstead?arefavourite可用作形容词或名词不能做谓语，应改为MyfavouriteisEnglish.或Englishismyfavourite(subject).4.瞬间动词和延续性动词的混用A.英语中瞬间动词不能语“段”时间连用应将其替换为状态动词或延续性动词HelentmeabookandtoldmethatIcouldborrowitforaweek.keep注意此类动词的替换arrive-be;buy-have;die-bedead;join-bein;leave-beaway;fallinlove-beinlove;getmarried-bemarriedB.瞬间动词与till或until引导的时间状语从句或构成的短语连用时，应使用否定形式，否则应使用状态动词或延续性动词Hewenttobeduntileleveno’clock.Hestoppedtalkinguntiltheteachercame.Hefellasleepuntil9o’clockthenextmorning.didn’tgo或改为Heworkeduntil11o’clock.didn’tstop或改为Hekepttalkinguntiltheteachercame.slept五、词义错误•WeallpersuadedFathertogiveupsmoking,buthewouldn’tlisten.•Theyoungmanpointedtoapolicemanoverthere,explainedandsaid,“Hestoppedusanhourago.”triedtopersuadeandexplained六、句式错误•Myclassmatessuggestmetostudyhard.•Welcomeyoutovisitourschool.•Thereusedtohavetwotreesintheyard.adviseMyclassmatessuggestthatI(should)studyhard.studyingYouarewelcometo(cometo)ourschoolforavisit有些动词不能接不定式作补语，这类动词有agree,demand,hope,insist,suggest,welcome等beWhatisasentence?1.Therainstoppedhimfromgoingtoschool.主语+谓语（+宾语+宾补+状语）=简单句2.Therainstoppedandthenhewenttoschool.主句+从句=复合句简单句+简单句=并列句3.TherainstoppedwhenIgothome.Ibelievethateverythingisgoingonwell.ShewasreadinganovelwhenIcamein.Sheisthegirlwhosingsbestinmyclass.Whatweneedistime.Thequestioniswhereweshouldgotomorrow.宾语从句状语从句定语从句主语从句表语从句主句+从句=复合句1.Thisearthquakewasverylarge.2.Manypeoplewaslosttheirhousesandparents.3.luckily,withthehelpofgoverment,wecaneatdeliciousfoodandlivegoodhouses.4.Inaworld,wearedeterminedtorebuiltourcountry.terriblegovernmentinwordrebuild5.Tomysad,thousandsofpeoplelosttheirfamiliesorseriouslyinjured.6.Afterthisdisaster,weallbecomemorestronger.7.Nowthereisstillmanypeoplecomeandlookwe.8.I’msurethatourdreamwillbecometrue.sadnessweremucharecomingtoseeus