半开放与开放性作文点击作业检查：目前，有不少中学生利用寒暑假期间打工赚钱．去年暑假期间，你曾在一家饭店打工当服务员．打工之余，你有如下感受：１．过去常常向父母要钱，现在你用自己赚的钱，心里很激动２．你明白了金钱的价值，也学会了一些与他人相处的方法３．积累了一些工作经验和社会经验，为以后步入社会作了些准备总之，你度过了一个愉快的假期．要求：不要逐字逐句翻译，词数１２０左右典型错误:1.词:thevaluableofmoney;manystudent;aEnglishcorner;theimportantofprotecting…;atMarch12th2.句子：（1)Ifell/wasexciting(2)Thejobwasverytired(3)Igettedmanyexperiences(4)Iwasworkedinarestaurant(5)Ithinkitwillgoodformyfuture(6)It’snoteasilyformyparentstoownmoney(7)IcouldbuysomethingwhatIwantwithmyownmoney(8)IhopeusetheexperiencesinourjobwhenIleaveschool(9)IusedtousemoneywhichfrommyparentsOnepossibleversion:Nowadaysitisusualforusstudentstofindpart-timejobsintheholidays.Lastsummer,Iworkedasawaiterinarestaurant,andIlearnedalot.Firstly,itwasthefirsttimeformetoearnmoneyonmyown,soIfeltextremelyexcited.NowIcanbuywhatIwantwithoutaskingmyparentsformoneyasbefore.Secondly,duringtheperiodIlearnednotonlythevalueofmoneybutalsothewaytogetalongwithothers.Thirdly,Igainedsomeworkingexperienceaswellassocialexperience,whichIfoundagoodpreparationfortheworldoutsideschool.Itwasgoodtomyfuturework.Inaword,Ihadawonderfulvacation.作业检查：假设你是李华.今天(2004年9月20日,星期一),你代表你校学生就学生的课外活动向来访的美国学生进行了介绍,并且你们进行了交流.请根据下面图画内容提示,用英语写一篇日记.主意:1.日记的格式和开头已给出;2.词数:100左右;3.参考词汇:代表—onbehalfofMondaySept.20,2004SundayTodayI’mverypleasedtohavemetthevisitingAmericanstudents.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.典型病句：1.Everyonehaveagoodtimethatday2.Iwasonbehalfofschoolmetthem3.ItalkedsomethingaboutEnglishcorner4.ManystudentsactivetakepartinEnglishcorner5.Therearealotofstudentsattend/takepartinit6.TheAmericanvisitorswasverypleasedtoseeit.7.Thestudents’lifeareverycolorful8.Itteachedustolearnlotsofthings.Onepossibleversion:MondaySeptember20,2004SunnyTodayI’mverypleasedtohavemetthevisitingAmericanstudents.Thismorningwehadafriendlytalkwiththem.Onbehalfofallthestudents,Itoldthemaboutourafter-classactivities:OurschoolholdstheEnglishCornereveryweeksothatthestudentscanpractisetheirspokenEnglish.InMarch,ourschoolusuallyorganizesatree-plantingactivityinthecountryside.OnNewYear’sEvewehaveaNewYearparty.RecentlymanystudentshavetakenpartintheEnglishSpeechContest.Alltheseactivitiesarewellreceived.Afterthat,Ishowedthemaroundourschool.AlthoughIwastired,Iwasveryhappy.书面表达中学生常见错误类型一散乱型——不着边际胡乱写；二逻辑混乱型——多出现在语句或情节描绘中；三语法不通型——一般出现在语句中；四误用词语型——语句中用词错误五粗心大意型——不认真阅读提示，或错写内容或丢三落四六喧宾夺主型——不分主次信马由缰丢掉主要内容而将非主要内容大写或特写写作要领1细读提示——明白写什么，日记、信函、报导或叙事描写2写全要点——了解核心内容，非重要情节，图画作文应认真分析判断才能分清主次。表格类原则上一个不能少3卷面干净——事先打草稿然后誊改是使文章通畅的关键4书写认真——不求文字隽秀力保规范工整，这是留下好印象的起码条件5层次分明——为使短文令人感到赏心悦目分成2甚至3段为好6承上启下——简而...
