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一.用词准确;表达地道【北京卷】【试题回放】第一节情景作文(20分)美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。2.词数不少于60。DearJeff,I’mHuafromBeijingHongxingMiddleSchool.I’mveryhappytolearnthatyou’regoingtostaywithmyfamilywhileyou’reinBeijing.Whileyouarehere,we’llprovideyouwitharoomofyourownwithabed,adesk,acoupleofchairsandaTV.You’llalsohaveyourownbathroom.Ourschoolisquiteclosetoourhome,sowecouldgotoschooltogetherbybike.Atnoonwe’lleatattheschooldininghall.I’msureyou’lllikethedeliciousChinesefoodthere,andenjoytalkingwithfriendsoverlunch.Classesinourschoolusuallyfinishat4intheafternoon.Youcanthenjoinotherstudentsinplayingballgamesorswimming.It’llbealotoffun.Ifyouhaveanyquestionsorrequests,pleaseletmeknow.We’lltryourbesttomakeyourstayhereinBeijingapleasantexperience.Bestwishes,LiHua[名师点评]这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。【安徽卷】【试题回放】假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：l表示赞成。l提出你喜欢的栏目。l简要说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右。2.新的开头和结尾已为你写好。3.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4.参考栏目：栏目—columnDearMr.Green,Iamveryexcitedtolearnthatwearegoingtostartamagazinetogether.Thatsoundsgreat!AndIdefinitelyagreewithyouonthat.Someofthecolumnswhichyoumentionedintheletterarereallymycupoftea.Say,“cultureexpress”givesusabetterunderstandingoftheworld.Sincepeoplefromdifferentpartsoftheworldhavedifferentvalues,it’snecessarytolearnfromeachother.Thiswillofferawonderfulchance.Apartfromthat,“blurtout”isprettygoodforChinesestudentstolearnEnglishidiomsandimproveoralEnglish.Lastbutnotleast,“entertainment”issocool!Thepopularsingers,actorsandcelebritiesaresocatchyandattractivethatyouabsolutelycan’tmissit!Teenagersarejustfondofthetrendythings.Well,Ican’tlistmore.Ireallycan’twaittoreadthatmagazine!Yoursfaithfully,LiHua第1页共5页【名师点评】这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：mycupoftea,apartfromthat,oralEnglish,lastbutnotleast,celebrities,catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list,can'twaitto简直是perfect!况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。二.非谓语动词为作文添彩【北京卷】【试题回放】情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“GreenActioninOurClass”为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60提示词：郊区suburbsApril12ismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfulexperienceonthatday.Inthemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingalltheway.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewatering.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weput...