HowtoGetYourCompositionAdvanced1.改变句子的开头方式.不要一味地用主语开头,适当使用状语提前1).Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttogetherearlyinthemoring2).Theyoungmancouldnothelpcryingwhenheheardthenews.3)WeallKnowthatinternetwillhelpusalotifweuseitproperly.Earlyinthemorning,wemetintheschoolgateandwenttogetherHearingthenews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingAsisknowntousall/Asweallknow,internetwillHelpusalotifweuseitproperly多种句式.避免在整篇文章中只使用一两个句式,可以灵活运用省略句,强调句,倒装句,主从复句with独立主格结构1).MyparentspraisedAhfuwarmly.Ithadsavedmysisterbravely.2).Wehadtostandtheretocatchotheroffenders3).Ourschoolhaschangedalot.4).Heopenedhiseyeswideandlookedatmecuriously.5).WhenIsawthescene,Ifeltveryfrightened.MyparentspraisedAhfuwarmly,whohadsavedmysisterbravely.WhatwehadtodoistostandtheretocatchotheroffendersOurschoolhasbeen/isnolongerwhatitwas/usedtobe.Helookedatmecuriouslywithhiseyeswideopen.Atthescene,howfrightenedIfelt!分词和不定式---极强的语言表现力1.Hestoppedushalfanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffenders.2.Wehadsshortrest,Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories;someplayedchess.3.Tomisaboyofsix.Heknowsthreelanguages.4.Thebosswasgreatlysatisfiedwithmyansweranddecidedtoemployme.Hestoppedushalfanhouragotomakeuscatchthe…Havinghadashortrest,webegantoplayhappily,singinganddancing.Sometoldstories,whileothersplayedchess.Beingaboyofsix,Tomknowsthreelanguages.Asaboyofsix,Tom…Agedsix,Tom…Greatlysatisfiedwithmyanswer,thebossdecidedto过渡词---文章的润滑剂记住积累一些常用的过渡词,拿来即用:then,besides,furthermore,moreover,Whatwas/ismoreWhatwas/isworse,Inaddition(tothis),sofarasI’mconcerned,Aswell(as…),notonly…butalso,onthecontrary,afterall,apartfrom,inmyopinion,therefore,asaresult,Needlesstosay(不用说),thereafter(后来),afterward,however,nevertheless,soonerorlater…巧用习语---增加文采巧用一些介词短语,名词短语,形容词短语使文采不同凡响1).Manyhousesarebeingbuilt.2).Shehurriedtocatchthetrain.3).WhenIthoughtofthecomingholiday,Ijustcouldn’thelpingsmiling.5).Whenthemangotonthebus,hewastiredandhungry.Manyhousesareunderconstruction.Shewasinahurrytocatchthetrain.Atthethoughtofthecomingholiday,Ijust…WemadeadecisiontostayandgivehelptothepooroldladyTiredandhungry,themangotonthebus.4).Wedecidedtostaytohelpthepooroldlady洋味十足---才是好文章Idon’twanttolivewithastrangerinahotelroom.Sheshoutedloudly,“I’vesucceeded!”Iwasveryeagertogohome.Idon’twanttoshareahotelroomwithastranger.Sheshoutedatthetopofhervoice,“I‘vemadeit!”Icouln’twaittogohome.不难的一招---相同的意思用不同的词语1)Ilikebeingleftquietwhilemysisterlikesbeinginanactivesituation.2)Myfatherlosthisworkoneweekaftermymothergotherworkinasupermarket.Ilikebeingleftquietwhilemysisterenjoysbeinginanactivesituation.MyfatherlosthisworkoneweekaftermyMothergotherjobinasupermarket.HowtoGetYourCompositionAdvanced1.改变句子的开头---灵活的奥妙2.多种句式---精彩总是在变化中3.分词和不定式---极富表现力的表达4.过渡词---文章的润滑剂5.习语---使你文采飞扬,与众不同6.洋味十足---话措词7.不难的一招---相同的意思用不同的词语AStudent’sversionManystudentsfeelitdifficulttofinishsomuchhomework.Notonlydotheyhaveclassesinschoolbutalsodotheirhomeworkathome.Ihaveheardthatsomeofstudentsstayupuntilmidnight.Howhardtheyare!Inmyopinion,therearesomereasonscausingit.Ononehand,theteachersconsiderthatthemoreexercisethestudentsdo,thebettertheywilllearn.sotheteachersaskthepoorstudentstodoagoodmanywork.Ontheotherhand,theparentsalsodemandtheirchildrenthattheyshoulddotoomuchhomeworkinordertogettheirlessonsimproved.I’mnotinfavouroftakingtoomuchwork.Theteachersandparentsshouldchangetheirwaytobringuptheirchildren._______________________________________________________________________________________________________agreatdealof______________/结束语书面表达最能体现你的基本功,所以平时要加强自己的基础知识学习.临渊羡鱼,不如退而织网.只有基本功扎实了,才能得心应手,随意发挥.句子长短总相宜,各种表达随我用.希望本节课给大家有所启发,有所收获.展示平台---你来试试?Rewritethefollowingpassage:LiHongandIdecidedtomakesomecardsourselvesformotherstocelebrateWomen’sDay.Imadeacard.Itwasmadeofhardpaper.Therewasaredleafonit.Itread“Congratulations,Mum!”Theredleafstandsformyheart.LiHongdrewapicture.Inthepicturewasalovelypandawithabucket.YangMingmadeadovewithapieceofhardpaper.Therewasanoteinitsmouth.Itread“Wishyouhappyallthroughyourlife!”Ourmotherswerepleasedaftertheyreceivedthepresents.
