WritingReadtheadvertisementandthelettertotheNewFutureLanguageSchool
Whatinformationdoesthewriteroftheletterwanttoclarify
locationcoursecontentnumberofstudentsqualificationscertificateprepaymentcoursefeeregistrationfeedurationofthecourseholidays★★★★★★Findmistakesofstyleintheletterandreplacethemistakeswiththefollowingformalwordsandexpressions
DearSir/Madam,Iwouldlike,Iamwritingto,Inaddition,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldexplainwhy,Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou,assoonaspossible,Couldyoupleasetell/sendme,Yoursfaithfully,Ireadthat1
Hithere→DearSir/Madam2
I’m→Iam3
Iwant→Iwouldlike4
Idon’tseewhy→Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldexplainwhy5
Yousay→Ireadthat6
Bytheway→Inaddition7
Iwant→Iwouldlike9
Sendme→Couldyoupleasesendme10
ASAP→assoonaspossible11
Writesoon→Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou12
Cheers→Yoursfaithfu