WritingReadtheadvertisementandthelettertotheNewFutureLanguageSchool.Whatinformationdoesthewriteroftheletterwanttoclarify?locationcoursecontentnumberofstudentsqualificationscertificateprepaymentcoursefeeregistrationfeedurationofthecourseholidays★★★★★★Findmistakesofstyleintheletterandreplacethemistakeswiththefollowingformalwordsandexpressions.DearSir/Madam,Iwouldlike,Iamwritingto,Inaddition,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldexplainwhy,Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou,assoonaspossible,Couldyoupleasetell/sendme,Yoursfaithfully,Ireadthat1.Hithere→DearSir/Madam2.I’m→Iam3.Iwant→Iwouldlike4.Idon’tseewhy→Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldexplainwhy5.Yousay→Ireadthat6.Bytheway→Inaddition7.Iwant→Iwouldlike9.Sendme→Couldyoupleasesendme10.ASAP→assoonaspossible11.Writesoon→Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou12.Cheers→Yoursfaithfully8.Justtellme→CouldyoupleasetellReplacetheunderlinedwordswiththesewords:aslongas,exceptif,if1.Itisnotclearwhetheryoucandojustoneofthesessions.2.ThereisadiscountprovidedthatIpayinadvance.3.IwouldprefernottostudyEnglishvarietiesunlessitisreallynecessary.ifaslongasexceptifChoosethecorrectwordsfromthebrackets.Ilikegoingtoclass(aslongas/unless)itisn’tboring.Iwon’tgetagoodgrade(providedthat/unless)Istudyhard.Idon’tknow(unless/whether)I’dlikeworkinginanothercountry.IwillstartthecourseinAugust(providedthat/unless)Igetaccepted.5.Idon’tlikegoingoutonFridaynight(unless/whether)I'vefinishedallmyworkfortheweeks.6.GoingtoThailandfortheholidayssoundsgreat(aslongas/whether)I’vesavedupenoughmoney.7.Iamnotsure(if/providedthat)it’ssuchagoodidea.8.Iwillplaytennis(unless/providedthat)we’refinishedby5pm.WritealetterfromNewFutureLanguageSchoolreplyingtotheprospectivestudent.Followthestagesbelow.GreetingSessionsDurationReasonsforEnglishvarietiesoverviewFeesQualificationsClosingStage1:readtheadvertisementandtheletteragain,takenotesofthequestionsintheletter,thenlistthethingsyouneedtoincludeintheresponse.Stage2:planyourparagraph.Stage3:writeyourletter.Remembertowriteinaformalstyle.Trytoincludeexamplesofunless,whether,aslongasandprovidedthat.Workinpairsandshareyourletters.SeeYou!
