2006 年北京市海淀区高三英语一模优秀作文第一部分：情景作文第一部分：情景作文•话题：话题：校园生活校园生活•文体：文体：应用文（日记）应用文（日记）•审题要求：审题要求：•文体：文体：记叙文记叙文•时态：时态：过去时过去时 ++ 现在时现在时•人称：人称：第一人称第一人称•要点：要点： 1.1. 学校门口集合学校门口集合 2.2. 乘车到体育场乘车到体育场 3.3. 热身准备热身准备 4. 4. 长跑测试（详写）长跑测试（详写） 5.5. 体会感受体会感受看图作文的基本步骤：1.1.认真审题定格式认真审题定格式2.2.仔细审图定要点仔细审图定要点3.3.连句成篇连句成篇4.4.全面检查免失误全面检查免失误写作要领• 1. 读图，理解每幅图所表达的意义。• 2. 为每幅图列出关键词。• 3. 行文，使用表示时间顺序的连接词使文章流畅。适当增加与本文有关的内容使文章充实。• 4. 最后简谈体会作为结尾。给分要求：第一档第一档优秀优秀18-2018-20要点齐全，内容充实；用词准要点齐全，内容充实；用词准确，句式丰富；行文连贯，结确，句式丰富；行文连贯，结构紧凑。构紧凑。第二档第二档良好良好15-1715-17要点齐全；用词、句式较丰富；要点齐全；用词、句式较丰富；连接成分使行文连贯。连接成分使行文连贯。第三档第三档及格及格12-1412-14要点全；词汇、句式能满足任要点全；词汇、句式能满足任务要求，可达意。务要求，可达意。第四档第四档不及格不及格6-116-11缺要点，词汇、句式有限；影缺要点，词汇、句式有限；影响理解响理解优秀作文 Early in the morning, we got together at the school gate and headed for Haidian Sport Center by bus. Following the teacher, we walked into the playground. Then we were asked to do some pre-exercises in order to avoid getting hurt in the test. I was not good at sports so I felt a little nervous. Later, it was my turn to take the 1500-meter running. I took a deep breath and walked towards the start line. Hearing the teacher’s “Ready, go”, I set out first. During the last 200 meters’ distance, I felt too tired to move a step. Suddenly, I heard my classmates’ voices. Their words encouraged me a lot and I ...
