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高三英语期中考试高三英语期中考试写作分析写作分析高三英语期中考试高三英语期中考试写作分析写作分析评分标准：【情景作文】• 18 – 20 优秀 要点齐全；行文流畅；逻辑清晰；用词准确；句式丰富；结构紧凑。• 15 – 17 良好 要点齐全；用词较准确；衔接与过度自然（连接词）• 12 – 14 及格 能完成规定任务（写出异同），表达清楚，可懂。• 9 – 11 错误多。个别句子不懂。• 6 – 8 错误多。个别句子可懂。• 1 – 5 相关单词出题意图： 紧密结合教材（ Unit 3 The Land Down Under ）。 内容熟悉。 复习和应用所学词汇。I. 审题： 提示中所有信息。“介绍澳大利亚和新西兰两国的异同”。1. 确定文体—— 议论文2. 分析素材：对表格进行分析，找出相同与不同点。 相同不同Both……and …… Compared with B, A is larger.Like…… Unlike…..Similar to…… Different from……also whileSo is / does….It is the same withland form: consist of, be made up oflocation: lie in, be located in3. 应用词汇：对比II. 篇章结构• 纵向比较：逐个国家地说明，要点顺序可调整。( 样文 1)• 横向比较：（样文 2 ）Para 1 Similarity: The two country are both located in the South Pacific and they have a lot in common. (the 1st four points)Para 2 Difference: However, there are some difference between the two countries. ( the last two points)学生习作1) Both Australia and New Zealand are very beautiful countries in the world and also they have a lot of things in common. Located in South Pacific, Australia and New Zealand are both made up of two islands, where the official language is English. Besides, Australia and New Zealand have large sheep population and wool industry, from which people can benefit a lot. On the other hand, the two countries are different. Australia has the population of about 20,000,000, much larger than New Zealand’s, which is only 4,500,000. Apart from population, Australia has large area, while New Zealand’s...