第 3 讲 增加细节的六种技巧 在英语书面表达中 , 增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中 , 考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容 ; 在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容 , 否则很有可能造成内容不充实、词数要求不达标或者结构不连贯等问题。适当增加细节内容 , 能够使习作流畅、丰满 , 达到应有的表达效果。1. 增加同位语或定语从句(1)I am Li Hua, ________________________________________( 我们学校的学生会主席 ). / ____________________________( 来自中国的一位交换生 ). Chairman of the Students’ Union ofmy schoolan exchangestudent from China(2)I want to have a pen friend, _______________________________________( 希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩 ). (3)On the Internet, people can seek information about their favourite stars and buy tickets at a discount as well, ____________________________________( 既省时又省钱 ). hopefully a girl withinterests similar to minewhich is both time-saving and economical(4)To begin with, the theme of the show is Environmental Protection, _______________________________________________ ( 这不仅有意义而且很有趣 ). which will be not only meaningful but alsointeresting2. 列举具体的实例来补充说明(1)First, the mountain has the unique marvelous wonders, ________________________________________________. ( 比如 , 黎明时冉冉升起的太阳和日落时的红色的晚霞 ) such as the rising sun at dawn and rosyclouds at sunset(2)In the past two weeks, we have had the cultural communication in many aspects, ______________________________________________( 比如 , 在生活、学习 , 体育运动 , 文学艺术等方面 ). such as life, study,sports, literature, arts and so on3. 添加与所给信息有关的原因 , 结果 , 条件 , 让步 , 手段 , 目的等内容(1) __________________________________________________________( 因为知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣 ), I am writing to invite you to participate in this activ...
