第 1 讲 把握五档作文标准典例 (2019· 全国卷Ⅰ ) 假定你是李华 , 暑期在伦敦学习 , 得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者 , 内容包括 : 1. 写信目的 ; 2. 个人优势 ; 3. 能做的事情。注意 : 1. 词数 100 个左右 ; 2. 可以适当增加细节 , 以使行文连贯 ; 3. 结束语已为你写好。_______________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua【学生习作】三档作文 (14 分 )Dear Sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua. I’m an exchange student from China. I have studied in London for half a year. I’m very happy to know that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held and I hope I can do something for this. I love Chinese painting, when I was young my grandfather taught me Chinese calligraphy and traditional Chinese paintings, when I grow up I become more and more interested in Chinese paintings, whether traditional or modern ones. So I could be a good commentator for visitors in the gallery. Of course, I canspeak good English and it’s no problem to serve the people. I hope I can have the honor to be a volunteer for the exhibition, please reply at your earliest convenience. Yours, Li Hua四档作文 (19 分 )Dear Sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in London University. It’s exciting to hear that a Chinese painting exhibition will be going on at our community museum next month and I’m writing to apply for an opportunity to be the volunteer. Because I love Chinese paintings and I’m very familiar with some famous Chinese paintings, which will be helpful to introduce them to people from all over the world. What’s more, I have been studying in London for 3 years and have developed good ways of communicating with others. I do hope I could help for the coming exhibition and let more visitors have a better understanding of Chinese paintings. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua五档作文 (22 分 )Dear Sir or Madam, How are you doing? I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager, who is crazy about different cultures around the world. Recently, I learned in your official website that a volunteer is needed for an exhibition of Chinese traditional painting in London. So I am writing to apply for this position. Here are three main reasons why I am the best choice for you. First and foremost, having lived in London for half a year before as an exchange student, I am undoubtedly good at English; as a result, it is a piece of cake for me to introduce everything to international friends. Besides, I learned Chinese painting for morethan ten years in my childhood; therefore, I do know a lot about this great art form. Last but certainly not least, as vice monitor of our class, I am kind, patient and always ready to help others. Hopefully, this wonderful chance would be offered to me. I have the confidence that I will have a great time. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua【技法点金】全国卷书面表达赋分标准
