第 2 讲 审题谋篇黄金五步法典例 (2018 · 全国卷Ⅰ ) 假定你是李华 , 你的新西兰朋友 Terry 将去中国朋友家做客 , 发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件 , 内容包括 : 1. 到达时间 ; 2. 合适的礼物 ; 3. 餐桌礼仪。注意 : 1. 词数 100 个左右 ; 2. 可以适当增加细节 , 以使行文连贯。Step 1. 审题立意体裁建议信时态一般现在时和将来时人称第二人称结构三段要点1. 欢迎到中国做客2. 合适的到达时间 ; 合适的礼物是什么3. 餐桌上有哪些礼仪Step 2. 谋篇构局Step 3. 要点盘点1. 第一段——点题 : 你的新西兰朋友 Terry 将去中国朋友家做客 , 发邮件向你询问有关习俗。①In your last letter, you asked me about ___________________________________. Now, I am writing to inform you of __________________. being aguest to a Chinese friend’s homesome relevant details2. 第二段——主体段落展开 : 到达时间 ; 合适的礼物 ; 餐桌礼仪。② 到达时间——应该早到。You are supposed to ___________. ③ 合适的礼物——最好带些小礼物。You’d better ___________________. arrive earlybring some small gifts④ 餐桌礼仪——避免发出声音。You need to avoid _____________. making noises3. 第三段——表达期望 : 期望建议有帮助。⑤Hopefully, these suggestions would be ___________to you. of great helpStep 4. 润色升级1. 句②增加与所给信息有关的结果You are supposed to arrive early, ____________________________________________, which is not only meaningful but also interesting. so that you can helpthe family prepare the dinner2. 句③列举具体事例拓展要点You’d better bring some small gifts, ____________________________. 3. 句④增加时间状语来拓展要点____________________________, you need to avoid making noises _________________. such as a book ora Chinese knotWhen you are enjoying the mealwhile chewing foodStep 5. 满分作文Dear Terry, How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to ...
