ContinuationwritingDescriptionisapictureofwords!FreetalkQ1:Ifafirebrokeoutinyourflat,whatwouldyoudo?Q2:Wouldyouriskyourlifetotakesomethingpreciouswithyou?AstorywhenwherewhowhathowwhyReadforinformationTomJaneMakcikeldersisterneighborneighbor“Quick!Quick!....”someoneyelled.Peoplewererunningandcrying.Thenathickburningsmellfilledtheair.When...,athickcloudof...greetedhim.wordsactionssurroundingsafigureofspeech修辞atmosphereReadforplotspersonification拟人rushedoutheadedtowardsstoppedturnedaroundhadnoideabutfollowedbeganbangingbutnoanswerfeared“...”Tomcried.refusedtopoundedagainstheadedbackinteractions(互动)brave,selfless,determined,heroic...actionsactionsactionsJane'simagery（意象）heroictimid(胆小的),selfish...actionsmentalstatewordsA/An________girlheroicTheme(主题)?Help&lovebetweenpeoplenervous,Tom'simagerytimidcontrastPara.1:Tomnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Para.2:Luckily,someneighborspassingbystoppedandofferedhelp.Plotdeduction(推理)Mainidea:Withthehelpoftheirneighbors,theymanagedtosavetheoldlady.Theme:Help&lovebetweenpeopletroublesolutionMainidea:TomandJanepoundedagainstthedoorbutinvain.Para.1:Tomnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.JaneandTompoundedagainstthedoorbutinvain.atmospheretimidTomheroicJaneaskedJanetoleaveshookheadkeptpoundingfrightenedterrifiedwasovercomebyherresolvebegged,“...”insisted,“...”surroundingscharacter'sreactionatmosphereThedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.—Book1“Anne’sBestFriend”I.Surroundings1.__________________,_________,___________________heldJaneandTomentirelyintheirpower.2.Therewasnostoppingthefires.Therewasnowayto______thedooror_________theoldlady.Therewasnostoppingthefires.Therewasnowaytoorganizeorcommunicate.—Book1“TheStoryofAnEyewitness”Learnmore,recitemore,usemore!Thebig,terrifyingfirethesmoketherunningpeopleopenawakenII.Character'sreactionphysicalreactionmentalreactionTheywerecoughing.Theyweresweatingateverypore(毛孔).Theywerechokedtodeath.Theireyeswerestinging(刺痛).1.Frozenwithfear,hestoodrootedtothespot.2.Aburstofhorrorheldhimtotallyinitspower,andhewasunabletomoveaninch.3.Hefeltthatthebloodinhisbodyfrozerapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.4.Timeseemedtostandstill.Para.1:Tomnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.JaneandTompoundedagainstthedoorbutinvain.atmospheretimidTomheroicJaneaskedJanetoleaveshookheadkeptpoundingfrightenedterrifiedwasovercomebyherresolvebegged,“...”insisted,“...”1.surroundings...heldsb.entirelyintheirpower.Therewasno...Therewasno...2.character'sreaction(physicalandmental)werecoughing/sweatingateverypore...Timeseemedtostandstill.Frozenwithfear,hestoodrootedtothespot.OnepossibleversionTomnoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Therewasnostoppingthefires.Therewasnowaytoopenthedoororawakentheoldlady.Chokedbythethicksmoke,bothofthemwerecoughingandweresweatingateverypore.Frozenwithfear,Tomstoodrootedtothespot.HeheldJane’shandtightlyandbeggedJanetorunforsafetyasquicklyaspossible.Janetriedtoshieldhernosefromthechokingsmokeandshookherhead.ShekeptpoundingagainstthedoorwhileTomburstoutcrying.storyeffectinteractionsLuckily,someneighborspassingbystoppedandofferedhelp.Atthesightoftheneighborsofferinghelp,asenseofstrengthimmediatelyreplacedthemountingfearandanxietyinJane’smind.ShetoldthemMakcik,anoldlady,mustbestillintheroom.Hearingthewords,theyforcedthedooropenwithalltheirmight.Sureenough,Makcikwaslyinginbed,unconscious.Withoutdelay,shewascarrieddownstairsandthenrushedtothehospital,whereshefinallycametoherself.PeopleintheneighborhoodfeltrelievedandJaneandTom’sjoywasespeciallyimmense.
