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TheWorldExpoin2010（世博会）英文作文TheWorldExpoin2010(2010年世博会)TheWorldExpoin2010Shanghaiwillhostthe2010WorldExpo.TheWorldExpohasalonghistorybutithasneverbeenheldinAsia.Sothe2010WorldExpoisanhonorforalloftheAsians.()urgovernmenthaspromisedthatitwillbethebestone.AndShanghai,asahostcity,willhavemorechancestodevelopquickly.AsastudentinShanghai,IshouldlearnEnglishwellsothatIcanbeavolunteerintheExpotohelpforeignersknowmoreaboutShanghai.HowToBeALovelyCitizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人)GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinShanghaiandmoreandmorepeoplethroughouttheworldarefocusingtheirattentiononShanghainow.AsacitizenofShanghai,IfeelImustsparenoeffortstodomybit.First,Idecidetohelpplantmoretreestomakeourcitymorebeautiful.Second,Ishouldobeysevennosandbegoodatlearningfromothers.Third,IshouldstudyhardsothatIcandosomethingbetterformycityinthefuture.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCertificateCrazeOnCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”2)产生这一现象的原因3)你的看法CertificateCrazeOnCampus行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。高分范文CertificateCrazeOnCampusInrecentyears,gettingacertificatehasbecomeanewcrazeamongcollegestudents.[1]Justrandomlyaskastudentoncampuswhatheorsheisbusydoing,[2]quitepossibly,youmaygettheanswer[3]thatheorsheispreparingforacertificate[2]ofsomekind.[4]Whydoesthiscrazeappear?[4]Therearemainlytworeasonsbehindthisphenomenon.First,[5]itistheemploymentpressurethatforcescollegestudentstogetmorecertificates.Withtheadmissionexpansionofcolleges,alotmoregraduateshavetofacethefiercecompetitioninthejobmarket.Howcanonemakehimselfmorecompetitive?Morecertificatesathand,maybe.Second,diplomaandcertificatesarestillimportantstandards[6]bywhichmanyemployersmeasureaperson’sability.Inordertoincreasethequalificationsforajob,thestudentscompelthemselvestorunfromoneexamtoanother.[7]Frommypointofview,weshouldbemorerational[8]whenitcomestocertificates,[9]sincecertificates[2]donotnecessarilyproveone’sability.Beingcrazyingettingcertificationsblindlyis[10]nothingbutwastingtime.Toconclude,weshouldfocusonimprovingourability[10]butnotgettingacertificateofnopracticalvalue.【亮点点评】[1]祈使句使用恰当。randomly意为“随意地，随机地”。[2]限定词使用恰当，使文章表达更严谨，增强了说服力。[3]that引导同位语从句，修饰theidea。[4]设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。[5]强调句型，此处是强调主语。[6]which引导非限制性定语从句，充当介词宾语。[7]用于引出“我”的观点。[8]“当谈到或提及…时”。[9]since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为“既然”。[10]“只是，仅仅”。“而不是”。佳句临摩1.佳句：Youmaygettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.临摩：离婚率上升尽管令人难过，但却是不争的事实。___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：Diplomaandcertificatesarestillimportantstandardsbywhichmanyemployersmeasureaperson’sability.临摩：在过去的三十年，发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步，其中包括健康水平的提高。_________________________________________________________...