WaystoDiversifySentences一篇好文章的条件很多。除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外，词汇的运用和句子的处理，也起着决定性作用可根据情况，使句子多样化，使文章灵活多姿。Example:下列五个句子的基本概念一样，但是句式不同，内容重点也有些差别：(1)Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(并列分句)(2)Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(现在分语短语+简单句)(3)Inthefarm,thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(副词短语+并列分句)(4)Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.(简单句+形容语短语)(5)Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(原因副词从句+主句)(1)和(5)的句式最常见；如果加上其他三种互相交替，句子不是更多样化吗？Exercise:Howtodiversifythefollowingsentencesbycombingthemtogether?(1)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.(2)Hefeltveryuneasy.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------(a)Theyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryuneasy.（简单句）(b)Theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseastraining.（简单句）(c)Theyoungpilot'sfirstoverseastrainingmadehimfeelveryuneasy.（简单句）(c)Extremeuneasinessseizedtheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastraining.（简单句）(d)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingveryuneasy.（简单句）(e)Itbeinghisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.（简单句）(g)Beingonhisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.（简单句）(h)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastrainingandfeltveryuneasy.（并列句）(i)Theyoungpilot,whowasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feltveryuneasy.（复杂句）(j)Whentheyoungpilotwasonhis/firstoverseastrainging,hefeltveryuneasy.（复杂句）(k)Astheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,hefeltveryuneasy.（复杂句）(l)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,sothathefeltveryuneasy.（复杂句）增强英语语句表现力的有效方法一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：Weak:Thetreesarebare.Thegrassisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.Revision:Thebrowngrassandbaretreesformadrablandscape.(转换为前置定语)Or:Thelandscape,bareandbrown,beggedforspringgreen.(转换为并列结构作后置定语)2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：1)Weak:Theteammembersaregoodplayers.Revision:Theteammembersplaywell.2)Weak:Oneworker'splanistheeliminationoftardiness.Revision:Oneworker'splaneliminatestardiness.3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：1)Weak:Thereisnoopportunityforpromotion.Revision:Noopportunityforpromotionexists.2)Weak:Herearethebooksyouordered.Revision:Thebooksyouorderedhavearrived.二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如：1、Poor:Mysupervisorwentpastmydesk.Better:Mysupervisorsauntered(=walkedslowly)pastmydesk.2、Poor:Sheisacarefulshopper.Better:Shecomparespricesandquality.ChapterOne文章开头句型1-1对立法:先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.例如(e.g)[1].Whenaskedabout.....,thevast/overwhelmingmajorityofpeoplesaythat.......ButIthink/viewabitdifferently.[2].Whenitcomesto....,somepeoplebelievethat.......Othersargue/claimthattheopposite/reverseistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguments/statements,but(Itendtotheformer/latter...)[3].Now,itiscommonly/generally/widelybelieved/held/acknowledgedthat....Theyclaim/believe/arguethat...ButIwonder/doubtwhe...
