主旨升华—助人型在读后续写中传达积极向上的正能量,是取得高分的要素之一
主人公受到别人的帮助或者帮助别人,是续写的重要主题之一
运用以下两种技巧,轻松写出助人型的主旨升华句
升华技巧一: from then on+行动1
From then on, I would try my best to help sb
like sb
Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future
从那时起,我会尽我最大的努力去帮助某人
只有这样,将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助
【点评】本句表达积极帮助他人,并传递这种正能量属于升华了文章,且使用倒装句,故属于高级加分亮点句
From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me
从那天起,每次我遇到需要帮助的人,我总是联系他们,希望把墨西哥家庭给我的善意传递给我
From then on, I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others
Just as a saying goes: “Rose given and fragrance in hands
”从那时起,我就决定把“爱”传递给别人
正如一句谚语所说:“赠人玫瑰,手留余香
From then on , Bernard made up his mind to help someone who needs help
Only in this way, could more a