读后续写的开头结尾和续写高分句式1 如何设置故事开端 一、巧用副词副词有修饰性副词 和连接性副词 (句子副词)两类,可用于修饰动词、形容词、句子等
修饰性副词 可表示程度、方式等,使所要表达的情感更加鲜明、强烈,使句子更具表现力和感染力
连接性副词 的运用,能使句间的衔接更紧密,逻辑更清晰,所表达的含义简洁明了
(一)修饰性副词Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass
他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃
Joyfully, he skipped up the street
他很高兴地跳过了街道
【这里的 carefully 和 joyfully 把后面两个动作“step 踩”和“skip 跳”描写的更加细致和生动
】典例赏析1
一到达 Scout 家, 那个年老的女人就急切地按门铃
Arriving at Scout's home, the old woman eagerly rang the doorbell
他真诚地说:“我母亲教导我,施以爱心,不图回报
”“My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness,”he said sincerely
我默默地想:如果我听父母的话, 这就不会发生了
“If I had listened to my parents, this would never have happened,”I thought silently
简在黑暗中不安地躺着, 非常想和汤姆还有她的家人在一起
Anxiously lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family
当被其他同学热烈地欢迎时, 她松了