读后续写的开头结尾和续写高分句式1 如何设置故事开端 一、巧用副词副词有修饰性副词 和连接性副词 (句子副词)两类，可用于修饰动词、形容词、句子等。修饰性副词 可表示程度、方式等，使所要表达的情感更加鲜明、强烈，使句子更具表现力和感染力。连接性副词 的运用，能使句间的衔接更紧密，逻辑更清晰，所表达的含义简洁明了。 （一）修饰性副词Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass. 他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃。Joyfully, he skipped up the street. 他很高兴地跳过了街道。【这里的 carefully 和 joyfully 把后面两个动作“step 踩”和“skip 跳”描写的更加细致和生动。】典例赏析1.一到达 Scout 家, 那个年老的女人就急切地按门铃。Arriving at Scout's home, the old woman eagerly rang the doorbell.2.他真诚地说:“我母亲教导我，施以爱心，不图回报。”“My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness,”he said sincerely . 3.我默默地想：如果我听父母的话, 这就不会发生了。“If I had listened to my parents, this would never have happened,”I thought silently .4.简在黑暗中不安地躺着, 非常想和汤姆还有她的家人在一起。Anxiously lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.5.当被其他同学热烈地欢迎时, 她松了一口气。Warmly welcomed by other classmates, she felt relieved. 6.玛丽十分担忧，如坐针毡。Terribly/Quite/Extremel y worried, Mary felt like sitting on pins and needles.7. 另外两个骑行者看到三个男人被一只凶猛的狼威胁着，完全惊呆了。The other two cyclists saw three men threatened by a fierce wolf,absolutely/ completely/ totally shocked. （二）连接性副词1.【段首句】But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.【续写句】Immediately , absolute darkness ruled the forest.【这里用时间副词“immediately 衔接+环境描写”，烘托了森林里迷路的紧张气氛。】 2.The nearer the helicopter got, the more Jane flagged the yellow blouse. Luckily , the helicopter didn't miss her this time. 直升机靠得越近，简挥黄色衬...
