小弟不才，迄今才撰写了三篇英章，但过程中也积累了一点经验，不敢敝帚自珍，今日也斗胆向各位虫友贡献一下。我这几篇章，不论内容如何，但每次审稿人对于语言的评价都是还不错的，well written，总结起来不外有三个小窍门：一是平常多积累。我在日常读献的时候，假如发现很的句子句式，都会记录在一个档里面，如下面的一段话，就是我在一篇章的摘要中发现的：二是注意行中 ransition words 的使用。ransition words 就是在行过程中，连接意义相关句子的词，如 herefore，thus，in particular 等等。使用这些词，会使得章连贯性，逻辑性强，读起来一气呵成，自然会给审稿人印象。下面是一个关于 ransition words 的一个，供各位虫友参考：ransitions Study Sheetransitions for place:in the background, in the distance, beyond, behind, above, below, in front of, elsewhere, in the middle, to the left, to the rightExample:y favorite painting is Botticelli’s Birth of Venus.In the middle of the painting stands Venus, the oman goddess of love, standing on a seashell.She floats majestically above the beautiful water below her.o her left a figure representing wind blows fierceclouds of wind in her direction.o her right a figure behind her attempts to cover her with a blanket and protect her.It is a truly breath-taking piece of art.ransitions for examples:for example, for instance, as an example, like, specifically, consider as an illustration, that is, such as, similar, similarlyransitions for emphasis:chiefly, equally, indeed, even more important, in particular, most important, without a doubt, indubitably, unquestionably, definitelyransitions for restatement:in short, that is, in effect, in other wordssimilarly, likewise, also, the same as, different than, opposite, unlike, insteadransitions for concession:although, of course, admittedly, true, doubtless, granted that, no doubt, indubitably, without a doubt, definitely, certainlyransitions for co...
