广东省2011年高考英语 作文预测 要点式（技巧与范例）素材

英语书面表达·要点式（格式与范例）(1)3 月 15 日，你班全体同学去了一家老人院。回校后，班主任要你写一份材料向校长汇报。汇报材料包括以下内容：1. 时间：早上 8:00 从学校出发；2. 活动内容：帮老人们洗衣、打扫房间，表演节目等；3. 向老人们赠送了一些礼品；4. 受到了老人们的表扬，下午 4:30 回校。注意：1. 不能逐条翻译，可以适当增加细节，使短文连贯；2. 词数:100 左右；3. 短文的开头已为你写好。Today, we went to a home for the elderly. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案一】Today, we went to a home for the elderly. We started at 8:00 at school. Half an hour later, we arrived. As soon as we got there, we first gave some gifts to the old men. And then part of us did washing for them, some of us clean the rooms and the yard. After finishing the work, we put on a show. The old men gave us a lot of applause.The old men praised us greatly. So we felt very happy. At 4:30, we left the old men with a big silk banner. How joyful we were!【参考答案二】Today, we went to a home for the elderly. And we got there by the school bus. No sooner had we arrived than we did the work as we planed. The girl students as well as the boy students did some washing and cleaning. We also took out their beddings in the sun. At last, we had a party.Although we felt tired, we were happy in the heart. At 4:30, we left the yard for school. The old men gave us a lot of applause and a big silk banner in return.